Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Reminds me of the Walking Dead series that I just couldn't get into. I was told a quinzaine had first line as the subject and the next two are used to make one question.

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Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Jeni. This Quinaine is certainly original thought contained. Fforgive me for not understanding. Is this something to do with that TV show the Walking Dead? LOL...Forgive me if I am wrong, my friend. Blessings. Bob

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Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

There are so many different styles of poetry. You have chosen one of the more difficult types and done an excellent job of writing a fine poem while following all the rules.

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Comment from RGstar

Excellent

I Like the irony ''can you run?'' Right out of the top draw.
For its humor in so few words, I hope this does well for you.
Always more difficult to give more of a full review with short poems.
Wishing you a good day.
Best wishes.
RGstar

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Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

I am a big fan of vampires, etc. I've always been obsessed with the genre and the undead who lives on human blood. Thanks for this brief poem on these folks. Good luck in this contest.
Bill

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Hey Bill, thanks for reading and reviewing my poem. Thanks so much for your kind review. I'm happy that you shared with me.

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

I'm thinking Zombies here, ha ha. The Undead...now that's creepy, and fascinating. I'd probably be frozen in fear, great Quinzaine, blessings....

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the review.

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Have mercy, a zombie quinzaine. The spreading influence of world war Z and the walking dead. I have read the examples and the form description, and this seems to be a valid entry.

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Thanks much for reading and reviewing my poem.

Comment from Craigitar

Excellent

Very simple and well done. There's a problem; problem addressed; possible solution. Seem like a recipe of living. Good job and luck with the contest.

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Thanks lol I'm glad you liked my little poem.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

I know full well that doggie can run, Jeni, but I'm not so sure the guy sitting down is interested in doing so.
Perhaps he's resigned himself to becoming one of the undead himself?
Well, you know what they often say. "If you can't beat 'em, join 'em"
Best of luck to you in the Quinzaine contest, my fiend friend.
~Dean :}

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Love ya Dean. I enjoyed reading this review.

reply by Dean Kuch on 12-Dec-2016

My pleasure, Jeni, as always.
~Dean

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. Your words flow well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well.

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Thanks winnona, for reading and reviewing my poem. Glad you liked it.