Luna's Form Poetry
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Comment from sandy montgomery
This is kind of cool form. I like how it is read. It reminds me of a verbal flip book. Imaginative and fresh. Thank you for sharing this unique form and as always for sharing your work.
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This is kind of cool form. I like how it is read. It reminds me of a verbal flip book. Imaginative and fresh. Thank you for sharing this unique form and as always for sharing your work.
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Thanks, Sandy. I'm happy you enjoyed the form!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
My first experience with this form and yes it does read fast and hard. Different from the rhyming that has the sing/song beat. I am amazed at the strength of the piece and the repetition makes for an interesting read.
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My first experience with this form and yes it does read fast and hard. Different from the rhyming that has the sing/song beat. I am amazed at the strength of the piece and the repetition makes for an interesting read.
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Barb, I'm happy that you enjoyed this. It wasn't that hard, I just had to clear my mind so the words could flow.
Thanks for your attention to my Portfolio!
jeni
Comment from Thomas Bowling
There are so many different styles of poetry. You have chosen one of the more difficult types and done an excellent job of writing a fine poem while following all the rules.
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There are so many different styles of poetry. You have chosen one of the more difficult types and done an excellent job of writing a fine poem while following all the rules.
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Thank you, Thomas. I'm happy that you enjoyed the poem. I'm happy that you checked me on the form as well, for I can certainly use all the help I can get!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You can certainly find all the different styles, Luna. I've never heard of this one either! But, as usual, you have given it your best shot and come out with a fine interpretation of the style. I though it was an exhilarating ride down the page, the name, 'The Blitz' is apt, you could easily see lots of little bombs hurtling down the page to their conclusion. Well done, excellent. :) Sandra xxx
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You can certainly find all the different styles, Luna. I've never heard of this one either! But, as usual, you have given it your best shot and come out with a fine interpretation of the style. I though it was an exhilarating ride down the page, the name, 'The Blitz' is apt, you could easily see lots of little bombs hurtling down the page to their conclusion. Well done, excellent. :) Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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dear sandra,
I'm happy that you enjoyed this blitz poem. Thanks for the kind review - I like that, lots of little bombs!
