Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Words upon Words"a place to gather my poetic forms
54 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Well done with this one, you've penned a particularly fine example of a palindrome poem. I really liked the content, which speaks of a child's developmental imagination and creative thinking, which unfortunately, sometimes are squashed by adult mores and limited concepts. Wel done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Well done with this one, you've penned a particularly fine example of a palindrome poem. I really liked the content, which speaks of a child's developmental imagination and creative thinking, which unfortunately, sometimes are squashed by adult mores and limited concepts. Wel done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Thanks for this kind review, roy. I apologize for the tardiness of the reply.
As always, thank you for your attention to my writing.
To the Moon and back!
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Don't ever apologise, nobody's as slack as, but when one has a lot of reviews, it's inevitable, completely forgiven,
Comment from RGstar
You have the form correct. That report style of yours works well here for it gives impact. You are in the zone for writing as the first time I have seen so many entries on the first page, but as said, embrace the imagination. Nice colourful production.
Best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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You have the form correct. That report style of yours works well here for it gives impact. You are in the zone for writing as the first time I have seen so many entries on the first page, but as said, embrace the imagination. Nice colourful production.
Best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 02-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Thanks for the kind review. I apologize for my tardiness.
Thanks for your attention to my writing.
To the Moon and Back!
Comment from TPAC
Original in presented conception this write has touching aspects of interests for reader. The thought of pillows and beds soft warming concepts I found pleasing in set form.
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Original in presented conception this write has touching aspects of interests for reader. The thought of pillows and beds soft warming concepts I found pleasing in set form.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Thanks for the kind review. I apologize for my tardiness.
Thanks for your attention to my writing.
To the Moon and Back!
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well done pallendrome that tells of fantasy and dreams of childhood. Although I would like to see a fairy and a centaur. And maybe a dragon. Though I am far from being a child.
Keep writing
Joan (dragonpoet)
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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This is a well done pallendrome that tells of fantasy and dreams of childhood. Although I would like to see a fairy and a centaur. And maybe a dragon. Though I am far from being a child.
Keep writing
Joan (dragonpoet)
Comment Written 02-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review of my poem. I do appreciate it!
luna
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No problem.
Joan
Comment from DR DIP
Wow Luna I just realized after reading your author's notes the skill in writing this poem. A palindrome? I am not familiar with this poetry. Well done, thanks for sharing
dip
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Wow Luna I just realized after reading your author's notes the skill in writing this poem. A palindrome? I am not familiar with this poetry. Well done, thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 02-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review of my poem. I do appreciate it!
luna
Comment from closetpoetjester
Certainly a terrific effort here with a form that can't be easy!!
I enjoyed this twilight read full of fairies, centaurs and trolls giggling and singing in forward AND reverse LOL
There were a couple of lines that seemed to me to be slightly forced "Note trolls..." and "Nightly sleep children..." reverse syntax didn't quite work but I appreciate this had to read both forward and backward.
I tried a Cleave poem once with lines that married up but it also had to be read as two seperate poems as well. I since abandoned it haha Too hard basket!!
If it's anything like this form I would be tearing my hair out LOL
Good solid effort and an enjoyment to read
Cheers P
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Certainly a terrific effort here with a form that can't be easy!!
I enjoyed this twilight read full of fairies, centaurs and trolls giggling and singing in forward AND reverse LOL
There were a couple of lines that seemed to me to be slightly forced "Note trolls..." and "Nightly sleep children..." reverse syntax didn't quite work but I appreciate this had to read both forward and backward.
I tried a Cleave poem once with lines that married up but it also had to be read as two seperate poems as well. I since abandoned it haha Too hard basket!!
If it's anything like this form I would be tearing my hair out LOL
Good solid effort and an enjoyment to read
Cheers P
Comment Written 02-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review of my poem. I do appreciate it!
luna
Comment from Jackarrie
hi Jeni,
You have done a wonderful job of this Palindrome poem, It also is a lovely poem to read about children's bedtime and the antics they get up to. I love the artwork.
Well done
mary
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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hi Jeni,
You have done a wonderful job of this Palindrome poem, It also is a lovely poem to read about children's bedtime and the antics they get up to. I love the artwork.
Well done
mary
Comment Written 02-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review of my poem. I do appreciate it!
luna
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Luna,
I enjoyed your palindrome. Your topic was fun to read & think about. Good job on the criteria of the style. It seems to read fine. The artwork is interesting, too.
Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Luna,
I enjoyed your palindrome. Your topic was fun to read & think about. Good job on the criteria of the style. It seems to read fine. The artwork is interesting, too.
Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 02-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review of my poem. I do appreciate it!
luna
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Jeni. Yes, I think you mhave the poem structure correct. Of course, I am no expert, especially when it comes to poetry, but I have seen enough of them on here in 12 years. LOL. This is a good subject for one too. Blessings, Bob
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Hi, Jeni. Yes, I think you mhave the poem structure correct. Of course, I am no expert, especially when it comes to poetry, but I have seen enough of them on here in 12 years. LOL. This is a good subject for one too. Blessings, Bob
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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12 years! Well, then many MANY thanks for being patient enough to have read that review. I had Tom activate my old portfolio for me and there are poems in there dating back to 2008, so I guess you were here when I was that first time!
Really, thanks so much, Bob. I appreciate you reading my stuff.
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:) Bob
Comment from Thal1959
You have the form correctly. Very well done. I enjoyed the fantasy terms like, moonscape, faeries, centaurs, trolls, etc. Reads well forward and back. Thanks.
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You have the form correctly. Very well done. I enjoyed the fantasy terms like, moonscape, faeries, centaurs, trolls, etc. Reads well forward and back. Thanks.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review of my poem. I do appreciate it!
luna
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You're welcome.
