Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Luna, I have never heard about the form before, but then again I don't know much about poetry, but I like to read poems. And this was no exception. I really enjoyed it and thanks to your notes it enhanced my enjoyment. I understand the alliteration element. Well done. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Luna,

I got a little dizzy reading the instructions in your author
notes, so I thought I would go back and read your Alliterisen again...
keeping in mind its structure, but just enjoying reading it too:)
It is always nice to see the form in notes though...I
appreciate them...my brain just does not wrap around
them well.

I did notice your nice alliteration, rhymes and imagery in this.
As I went back to read it...they are still there...haha
"King's court is grateful to our lone legend."

Beautiful job on this one, Luna,

Linda

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna

Comment from Cedar

Excellent

This is a very interesting poem. The Alliterisen form that you used is also very interesting, one that I'm not familiar with. However, your explanation in your notes really helped. Very well done. Bill

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good, nicely done on complex alliterisen with dragon slayer it works out well here. Thanks for the share and have a wonderful day

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2016

Bill, I'm happy to hear you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for your kind review.

Always, Luna

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Well done Luna. Without even reading your author's notes I knew this was a poem about alliteration. You have done it so well.

dip

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

I like the story within this, most especially the last line, 'as the magic man is so striking'....that line is quite striking! Wonderful, blessings....

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

This is a delightful poem as the opening line captures the imagination. I could imagine children/teens trying to recite it and dealing with the seemingly tongue-twister alteration. Playful, fun.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

A great poem. I am a big fan of alliteration. When you recognize it you begin to see how often it has been used in great oratory through the years.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes I enjoyed this it is well written you have again mastered this form nicely it made me smile well done again regards Jill

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Jeni, I can honesty say never written this form...I have so many I would love to get to...but have slowed down on my writing...one day I will pick it back up...sigh...I love your poem bold wizard, dangerous dragon and the fair maiden...and your picture couldn't be any better...very well written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna

reply by l.raven on 06-Dec-2016

I get behind myself...no apologize needed...and you are so very welcome...xxoo Linda