Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is an exquisite piece of poetry with that magical sentiment that wraps me around the poem's finger dear jeni! its enchanting format is also noticeable and fits the bill right with this poem.
thank you for sharing!
virtual six..
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2016

Dear Rebekka,

Thanks so much for your kind review. I think I remember you from back when i was on the site before, am I right?

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

The mythical woulds/garden is always a good setting for such an adventure. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2016

Dear Charlie,

thank you for your review. I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to respond. I am out of town at my sister - in - laws deathbed. We're having to pull this plug tomorrow due to her wishes. Please understand if I don't answer reviews right away for a short period of time. ❤️❤️❤️

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

I loved the illustration to compliment your Kyrielle Sonnet. The presentation was wonderful. Your AABB rhyming was smooth and gave your story/poem a lift. I love mystical poems, fairies and centaurs all of the creatures we dream of. One special poet loved this form of poetry, you may remember Adewpearl (Brooke) thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2016

Dear Susie, I do indeed remember Brooke. How nice that you brought her up.

thank you for your review. I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to respond. I am out of town at my sister - in - laws deathbed. We're having to pull this plug tomorrow due to her wishes. Please understand if I don't answer reviews right away for a short period of time. ❤️❤️❤️

reply by Aussie on 18-Nov-2016

A tough time for all the family; at least she will be free and whole when she returns to her real home. Blessings and prayers, Kay.

Comment from sunnilicious

Exceptional

This is a beautiful poem. Lovely accompanying artwork too, and not necessary for the poem. They visual imagery is whimsical and carefree. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Fun and enjoyable to read. Nice and neat work.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2016

Dear sunnilicious,

I'm honored and thrilled with this six - star review.
I'll not forget it.

I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to respond. I am out of town at my sister - in - laws deathbed. We're having to pull this plug tomorrow due to her wishes. Please understand if I don't answer reviews right away for a short period of time. ❤️❤️❤️

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

I want to come into your world. It could be fun to see all the meadow creatures come out to play and what memories we could create. Great job and I didn't see anything that needed changing.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2016

Dear ExperiencingLiphe,

Thank you for your review. I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to respond. I am out of town at my sister - in - laws deathbed. We're having to pull this plug tomorrow due to her wishes. Please understand if I don't answer reviews right away for a short period of time. ❤️❤️❤️

Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

This is beautiful. I love the ephemeral quality of it. It flowed smoothly and was skillfully wrought. A lovely piece of work! Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2016

Dear Sandy, Thank you for your review. I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to respond. I am out of town at my sister - in - laws deathbed. We're having to pull this plug tomorrow due to her wishes. Please understand if I don't answer reviews right away for a short period of time. ❤️❤️❤️

reply by sandy montgomery on 18-Nov-2016

Totally understand. Sorry for your loss.

Comment from BlueTiger

Exceptional

Great post, Jeni! This is a beautiful, enjoyable poem. The words paint a dreamy picture, and the rhythm is good throughout it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2016

Dear Blue Tiger,

I'm humbled and honored by this wonderful six-star review.

Thanks from the bottom of my heart.

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

This is a lovely and imaginative Kyrielle Sonnet :) I love your rhythmic meter and sensible rhymes. I love the thought of dancing with mystical meadow creatures.

I'm sorry about the loss of your son. I send hugs and condolences.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016

I'm sorry this reply to your kind review is so late. I've just returned from Philadelphia dealing with the loss of my dear sister-in-law. I hope you understand.

Again, thank you for the review!

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

First, may I say I am so sorry for your loss, we don't expect to outlive our children, no matter what their ages. Your poem is a delight, it is magical and the way I'd want to remember my son, not down and morbid. John Martin would be proud of you. Superb! xsx Sandra. xx

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016

Thank you for your condolences and for your thoughtful review. I appreciate you!

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Hello Luna,
Your son's spirit shines through your words
This is wonderful way to remember his light
A marvelous Kyriellle poem written beautifully to the form
with a magical repeating line:
"Mystical meadow creatures dance"
and excellent rhymes
Pan and the fair folk are perfect subjects for this form
Excellent art work to match
Very well done

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016

Dear rspoet,

Thank you for mentioning my son in your review. I'm so happy that you enjoyed this poem. I hope to see you again ❤️❤️❤️