To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Always"Poems by Michael
32 total reviews
Comment from Bill O'Bier
Some interesting ponderings here. I enjoyed the free flow of the form you used. Thanks so much for creating this sweet piece. All the best to you my friend.
Bill~
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Some interesting ponderings here. I enjoyed the free flow of the form you used. Thanks so much for creating this sweet piece. All the best to you my friend.
Bill~
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
Comment from LIJ Red
Excellent music. Of course I like Willie, though. Curiously enough I think I see into this poem. Excellent. Do our liberals really want to do away with free elections, I wonder?
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Excellent music. Of course I like Willie, though. Curiously enough I think I see into this poem. Excellent. Do our liberals really want to do away with free elections, I wonder?
Comment Written 10-Nov-2016
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
The more you love the more you get back in return.
I love the fact that this refers to love between two people and yet divine love in the spiritual sense.
Very open
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The more you love the more you get back in return.
I love the fact that this refers to love between two people and yet divine love in the spiritual sense.
Very open
Comment Written 10-Nov-2016
Comment from AnnaLinda
Michael,
Again, you have a very unique style.
Your short lines and positive message
works. I'm not sure about "spent anticipates more"
but, you offered a generous amount for a review
I don't mean to be insulting...we
all have our own style.
It's all about divine love, right?]
Goodnight,
Linda
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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Michael,
Again, you have a very unique style.
Your short lines and positive message
works. I'm not sure about "spent anticipates more"
but, you offered a generous amount for a review
I don't mean to be insulting...we
all have our own style.
It's all about divine love, right?]
Goodnight,
Linda
Comment Written 10-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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Linda....I dont get much simpler than this.
all the "time"..."spent anticipates more"
time spent anticipates more.....see very simple.
well some do... mean to set precedent and encourage others to do the same. its really quite a fascinating look at evil workings. it crawls up my spine sometimes.
no ...its all about everything but...made Divine.
by Love...genuine love. its a good thing Linda...best this life offers. love Michael
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semantics...
Comment from Badger_29
I Loved the style. The opening line confused me a bit, until I read it twice. You evoke a powerful emotional response, and it is a distinct pleasure to read something so oddly, yet satisfyingly balanced. I could see no room for improvement; you have an intro, a splendid and thought provoking main course, and for desert, and ironic ending that takes me back to the beginning. Unorthodox seaming, but very well thought out and written. I liked this format and content, I think that you would enjoy my poem/song, "The Beacon"(please refer to my portfolio) Cheers, Darren < : - D ~
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I Loved the style. The opening line confused me a bit, until I read it twice. You evoke a powerful emotional response, and it is a distinct pleasure to read something so oddly, yet satisfyingly balanced. I could see no room for improvement; you have an intro, a splendid and thought provoking main course, and for desert, and ironic ending that takes me back to the beginning. Unorthodox seaming, but very well thought out and written. I liked this format and content, I think that you would enjoy my poem/song, "The Beacon"(please refer to my portfolio) Cheers, Darren < : - D ~
Comment Written 10-Nov-2016
Comment from Sis Cat
Strong use of repletion of good morning, good night, and all the time, whose orders you changed. Poem is about relationships but it can also be about having a relationship with the Holy Ghost or Divine Love. This is a tender, intimate poem
Thank you for sharing.
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Strong use of repletion of good morning, good night, and all the time, whose orders you changed. Poem is about relationships but it can also be about having a relationship with the Holy Ghost or Divine Love. This is a tender, intimate poem
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2016
Comment from Mustang Patty
A touching poem full of love, and the spirit. I liked the way the words flowed, and I was swept away. The repeat of the first stanza helped to accentuate the words, 'Good morning, goodnight.'
Well done. Thank you for sharing.
~patty~
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A touching poem full of love, and the spirit. I liked the way the words flowed, and I was swept away. The repeat of the first stanza helped to accentuate the words, 'Good morning, goodnight.'
Well done. Thank you for sharing.
~patty~
Comment Written 10-Nov-2016
Comment from His Grayness
I found this work to be really creative (as always from this gifted author) and presented in a captivating presentation that grips the reader's emotion and holds interest strongly. I cannot offer anything to improve this work and thank the author for a great read! HIS GRAYNESS
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I found this work to be really creative (as always from this gifted author) and presented in a captivating presentation that grips the reader's emotion and holds interest strongly. I cannot offer anything to improve this work and thank the author for a great read! HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 10-Nov-2016
Comment from MissMerri
I love this. It tells a subtle story of warmth and affection and love that is unencumbered and beautiful. Your poetry dazzles and amazes, but for me, the best part is the heart your words reveal. It is like peering into a sunlit garden and watching the flowers dance to your music. It is mesmerizing. "Precious knowing." I want to return often.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2016
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I love this. It tells a subtle story of warmth and affection and love that is unencumbered and beautiful. Your poetry dazzles and amazes, but for me, the best part is the heart your words reveal. It is like peering into a sunlit garden and watching the flowers dance to your music. It is mesmerizing. "Precious knowing." I want to return often.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2016
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-smile-...I love it when you talk about me....-smile-
the lil' girl in the video reminded me of a lil' girl I was reading about recently. you can tell good mornings just follow her around...-smile- crazy about ya....love Michael
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your love poem and the mesmerizing artwork of time standing still--the ensemble gives new meaning to "forever" and "Always". Good night and all the time- Joan
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I enjoyed your love poem and the mesmerizing artwork of time standing still--the ensemble gives new meaning to "forever" and "Always". Good night and all the time- Joan
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
