To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "something"Poems by Michael
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Comment from Bill O'Bier
As always, your words are expressive and great vibes with the artwork. Thanks for sharing this piece.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
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As always, your words are expressive and great vibes with the artwork. Thanks for sharing this piece.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
Comment Written 24-Oct-2016
Comment from DonandVicki
At first found this poem of yours dark and cold but I had to change my opinion as I read further. I think this is very well composed and the mixed media complements your work very well.
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At first found this poem of yours dark and cold but I had to change my opinion as I read further. I think this is very well composed and the mixed media complements your work very well.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2016
Comment from kathleenspalding
Very poetic poem (if that makes sense) that creates a strong mood and delivers an uplifting message at the end ( I think, LOL. I am easily confused by poetry.) Flows well, entertaining. I am not a poet, but I don't see anything that needs to be changed. Question - is it hate's (possessive) instead of hates (plural) adversary?
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Very poetic poem (if that makes sense) that creates a strong mood and delivers an uplifting message at the end ( I think, LOL. I am easily confused by poetry.) Flows well, entertaining. I am not a poet, but I don't see anything that needs to be changed. Question - is it hate's (possessive) instead of hates (plural) adversary?
Comment Written 24-Oct-2016
Comment from William Ross
This is a very well written free verse, like a bunch of little verses adding up to a conclusion. nicely done. Thanks for the share and have a great day. I didn't watch the videos, I just like the poetry.
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This is a very well written free verse, like a bunch of little verses adding up to a conclusion. nicely done. Thanks for the share and have a great day. I didn't watch the videos, I just like the poetry.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2016
Comment from Ricky1024
Sometimea the message is hidden in the bindings.
"Strayed away. .
LOST IN A SRCONDHAND NOVEL...
,What more can I say?
Ricky1024...
Latwr today I tirned 62...
Watch out strippers!
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Sometimea the message is hidden in the bindings.
"Strayed away. .
LOST IN A SRCONDHAND NOVEL...
,What more can I say?
Ricky1024...
Latwr today I tirned 62...
Watch out strippers!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2016
Comment from l.raven
Hi Michael, this is really beautiful....lovely wording written in your own unique style...I love your poem...and the picture precious...so very nicely written...and a beautiful video...love you Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2016
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Hi Michael, this is really beautiful....lovely wording written in your own unique style...I love your poem...and the picture precious...so very nicely written...and a beautiful video...love you Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2016
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Hi...-smile-
thank you...for loving me Linda. for being a friend to me when I most needed one. I always love you you know that...Michael
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Michael, you don't have to thank me for my love... my friendship...it was given to you from my heart...and your so welcome to it...I will always love you... you know that as well...Linda xxoo
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing the artful and dramatic video with us, with its bomb blast, scary faces and Michael Jackson-like footsteps. I found "trust is prejudice" and "the resurrection of dead flowers" the two most provocative lines. Here's to a serene Sunday evening- Joan
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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Thank you for sharing the artful and dramatic video with us, with its bomb blast, scary faces and Michael Jackson-like footsteps. I found "trust is prejudice" and "the resurrection of dead flowers" the two most provocative lines. Here's to a serene Sunday evening- Joan
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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well you know J...I knew my fans were beside themselves....I'm nothing if not compassionate. so I made a lil' whip cream....its ...its what I do Joan....I'm Michael...-smile-...love you-
Comment from MissMerri
This came from a deep place, obviously... The sincerity and tenderness are palpable. The music is beautiful, and the whole thing together is moving and remarkable. I loved it. You have a rare talent for putting your heart on the page. I admire that so much, Thank you for sharing yourself with us.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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This came from a deep place, obviously... The sincerity and tenderness are palpable. The music is beautiful, and the whole thing together is moving and remarkable. I loved it. You have a rare talent for putting your heart on the page. I admire that so much, Thank you for sharing yourself with us.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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well inspiration comes unexpectedly
Im learning to trust it...like the Meadow does tomorrow.
always in my heart ...love Michael
Comment from Mastery
Exceellent job, my friend. Your choice of words coupled with the two videos is a wonderful presentation. I liked these lines the best:
"fixated wants so bad
to abdicate all else for almost like Jesus
but she's His
hates adversary
genesis to end days
Loves Mother is Mary"
(Before I forget where were you born in Michigan? Always meant to ask. Blessings my friend and thanks for sharing. Bob
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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Exceellent job, my friend. Your choice of words coupled with the two videos is a wonderful presentation. I liked these lines the best:
"fixated wants so bad
to abdicate all else for almost like Jesus
but she's His
hates adversary
genesis to end days
Loves Mother is Mary"
(Before I forget where were you born in Michigan? Always meant to ask. Blessings my friend and thanks for sharing. Bob
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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Hey Bob...-smile-
thank you man...I knew it was a bit different. this one was challenging but needed out.
Michigan yes...Detroit when people still lived there.
moved to Sterling Heights when I was twelve or so...-smile- by Lakeside Mall....nineteen and scheiner. probably spelled differently ...by now...haha. anyway thanks Bob. love Michael
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Hey, Michael I am on the opposite side of the state. This is how Schoenner is spelled btw. LOL...Bob
