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Poems by Michael

23 total reviews 
Comment from l.raven
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Michael, this is one of the most beautiful poems I've every read...the way you write is like you pull the words for the heavens...writing truly so unique to only you...your poem is beautiful...and your video is so touching...I love it...love you Linda xxoo

if I created thus
with all the holy I've ever hoped to touch
could it be enough...I don't know

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2016
    Hi...-smile-
    well..not according to Phyllis...anymore anyway. seems my genius comes and goes...-smile-...thank you Linda for being my best friend for so long...kinda of miss you around here sometimes. Anyway,,,I always love you...Michael
reply by l.raven on 21-Aug-2016
    Oh she's jealous...you have the top poet on this site saying your writing is genius...RGstar(Roy)...I would be honored by that endorsement...that says it all...no one can touch your unique style...and you have some wonderful fans...smile...always best friends Michael...miss ya too...always love for you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Ricky1024
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

"Vocal chords sing no...
"Deaf mute ears...
"Tied in knot...
"Eyes Wide Shut...
"Blindness seated by Sun..
"My, Dear Lord....
"What hath I done?"
...
"Fantastical...
"Elastical...
"Caught in a Spell ..
"Going deeper...
"Ever DEEPER..
"INTO HELL!"
Nice work here Sir Micheal.
Ricky.....

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2016
    Hey Rick...-smile-
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2016
    sorry hiit the goofus button....well thank you Bro...I appreciate you enjoying this with me...I swing by a lil' later....love Michael
Comment from Joan E.
Excellent
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I do not know the answer to all the questions, but I was caught up in your reflections. Once again you added the perfect animated artwork and an intriguing title and repeat. Cheers- Joan

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 Comment Written 21-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2016
    Hey J...-smile....what do you mean...?.....-headshake-...no...no thats unacceptable....nope...I aint leaving J...until you get this squared away....you;re way smarter than me...use yer head girl...unless youre looking for company....haha...thank you Dear. love Michael
reply by Joan E. on 22-Aug-2016
    I may not know the answer but I'm smart enough to realize the questions are important! Smiles- Joan