Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements splendidly. I thoroughly enjoyed your creative approach of walking us through the soul's journey from conception to departure. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

Thanks so much my friend for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings.......................

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good, nicely done, great rhyming and rhythm with good meter. Great write on the soul. the bible says there is a bit of God in all of us, I believe that bit of God in each of us is that soul we have. Good luck on this and have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. You have a wonderful day as well. Blessings.........

Comment from LoannaLois

Excellent

To be able to write about your definition of soul, and still be able to rhyme each thought about it, was exemplary! I enjoyed your illustration, too.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

Thanks so much for your review, and very kind comments they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...................

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Really quite eloquently written. A beautiful entry into the Soul Writer contest. I truly enjoyed reading this one very much. I think this one, of all entries I've read so far, meets the requirements of the prompt. Wish you best of luck in the contest. It should fare well. God bless and hugs, Susanne

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 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...............

Comment from clsandau

Excellent

This is a great write describing soul in your words. Not an easy thing to do. You used good rhyming - Christ and suffice was a difficult one, but works very well. One little suggestion, in stanza 4 would last line work as... the spirited part of where I begin - work.? Just thinking it would be a good rhyme but maybe not what you are thinking. Beautiful set up with a great picture. Good Luck. Carol

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 Comment Written 15-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

Carol,
Thanks so much for your very kind and thoughtful review. You suggestion and best wishes are greatly appreciated. Blessings.................