Faith In God
six words of Hope24 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
Faith is believing without seeing. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Faith is believing without seeing. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Thanks so much for such a kind review and best wishes. Blessings..................
Comment from tennisracquet37
I loved the way you presented this piece of work. It flowed very nicely from word to word. Great topic, and a totally moving piece.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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I loved the way you presented this piece of work. It flowed very nicely from word to word. Great topic, and a totally moving piece.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings................................
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a short but important thought the defines faith well. Having one word on each line gives equal import to all words. The all capitals shows that is the most import word and the central idea of faith.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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This is a short but important thought the defines faith well. Having one word on each line gives equal import to all words. The all capitals shows that is the most import word and the central idea of faith.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings.......................
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No problem. Same to you.
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Comment from RodG
I would welcome the opportunity to have a theological discussion with the Speaker in this poem. He/she could be speaking from a pulpit on a Sunday morning. The sermon does make the listener think hard about what he believes. Speaking only for myself, I would substitute "trust" for "confidence." A very subtle difference, I know, but . . .
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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I would welcome the opportunity to have a theological discussion with the Speaker in this poem. He/she could be speaking from a pulpit on a Sunday morning. The sermon does make the listener think hard about what he believes. Speaking only for myself, I would substitute "trust" for "confidence." A very subtle difference, I know, but . . .
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Thanks so much my friend for such an outstanding review. I totally agree with you and have changed the word confidence to reflect the word "trust." Thanks so much for your suggestion it is greatly appreciated. Blessings.............
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My pleasure. Rod