Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "Light and Darkness"Dawn of Chaos
43 total reviews
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello TPAC,
Three tries and here's my assessment. Light came and darkness tried to prevailed. It's a story before creation, the truth and lies. There was a lot of thought into this poem. I guess I am not a deep thinker. Overall, good job for someone else to see what you are saying. Nice imagery of the darkness and light.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Hello TPAC,
Three tries and here's my assessment. Light came and darkness tried to prevailed. It's a story before creation, the truth and lies. There was a lot of thought into this poem. I guess I am not a deep thinker. Overall, good job for someone else to see what you are saying. Nice imagery of the darkness and light.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Glad certain aspects were found appealing to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comment.
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You are welcome. Stay blessed.
Comment from royowen
I'm so glad you've written and promoted this work, hope you're developing nicely and understanding of writing, you written a challenging theme and done it well, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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I'm so glad you've written and promoted this work, hope you're developing nicely and understanding of writing, you written a challenging theme and done it well, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Super glad certain aspects were found appealing to your interests, learning the proper presentation of.my views, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
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Most welcome
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
TPAC:
This is quite an intriguing piece of writing. I don't know that I've
ever seen a poem written quite like this. I wonder if you had to
defend this to any of your reviewers - I hope not. Thanks for sharing.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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TPAC:
This is quite an intriguing piece of writing. I don't know that I've
ever seen a poem written quite like this. I wonder if you had to
defend this to any of your reviewers - I hope not. Thanks for sharing.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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The statement is old and long forgotten, believing its reality of facts is still contained within us, being there among angel when these events occurred before the earth. Yeah, it paused a lot of my reviewers. Thanking you for your generous rate and alert response.
Comment from Ann Market
This is a clever poem using much metaphorical language. Although it takes strong attention to fully comprehend it, it is written well! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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This is a clever poem using much metaphorical language. Although it takes strong attention to fully comprehend it, it is written well! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Pleased certain aspects in this work were appealing to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and touching viewpoints.
Comment from amada
This is a great poem, it led me into quiet o introspection. Poems about creation bring the heart to a new starting point. The imagery you selected is a great addition.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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This is a great poem, it led me into quiet o introspection. Poems about creation bring the heart to a new starting point. The imagery you selected is a great addition.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Wow. Quite a view you hold about this write, reading others reviews confounded by its set statement. Glad certain aspects in this work were found appealing, thanking you for your generous rate and surprising comment about this view.
Comment from robyn corum
TPAC,
I hate to be blunt and rude, but I feel it's always best to be honest.
When we have had any personal interchanges, you seem to be a really smart and together-guy. But this piece just doesn't make any sense to me. (sorry!)
I totally that it's about the beginning of everything and Creation, but the words seem like you put them all in a Bingo-spinner and pulled them out randomly. I don't know why you've tried (seemingly) to make this more profound and elegant that it needs to be. I've learned (the hard way) that most people who read for entertainment do not like tough, difficult stuff. Don't like trying to decipher hidden meanings and such.
I suggest an edit....
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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TPAC,
I hate to be blunt and rude, but I feel it's always best to be honest.
When we have had any personal interchanges, you seem to be a really smart and together-guy. But this piece just doesn't make any sense to me. (sorry!)
I totally that it's about the beginning of everything and Creation, but the words seem like you put them all in a Bingo-spinner and pulled them out randomly. I don't know why you've tried (seemingly) to make this more profound and elegant that it needs to be. I've learned (the hard way) that most people who read for entertainment do not like tough, difficult stuff. Don't like trying to decipher hidden meanings and such.
I suggest an edit....
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Yeah, living in this existence a lot doesn't make sense, thanking you for your honesty and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Glad certain aspects in this read were appealing to your interests, thanking you for your warm statement and generous rate.
Comment from Monica Chaddick
I found your poem to be very intriguing. I had to read it several times to get a flow going in my head, but once I got it, I got it. I loved the artwork that was chosen to accompany your work. Best of luck in all of your future writing endeavors.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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I found your poem to be very intriguing. I had to read it several times to get a flow going in my head, but once I got it, I got it. I loved the artwork that was chosen to accompany your work. Best of luck in all of your future writing endeavors.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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A lovely sentiment from a charming and caring individual, thanking you for your uplifting words and generous rate.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about light and darkness we have to have both to keep the balance in life. Without darkness we will not be able to see the light. When we only have light we will not recognize the darkness.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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A very well-written poem about light and darkness we have to have both to keep the balance in life. Without darkness we will not be able to see the light. When we only have light we will not recognize the darkness.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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In chemistry the unfolding essence of all things that exist called heaven, thanking you for your warming thought and generous rate.
Comment from Cybertron1986
I love the play of words such as the use of "truth" with "proof." Also, your ending that gave hope to the reader by stating there is a light that exists in the darkness of a pit. That struck a strong emotion in me. Very unique expression. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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I love the play of words such as the use of "truth" with "proof." Also, your ending that gave hope to the reader by stating there is a light that exists in the darkness of a pit. That struck a strong emotion in me. Very unique expression. Well done!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Glad certain aspects in this write were appealing to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and warming views.