Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Wow, that was certainly a story about character, or several characters!
I like the depiction of the relationship as a serial rape--think I've known some of those.
Sort of a surprise ending, which was a cool twist.

Good story,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016

Thank you, Rhonda, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from create4christ

Excellent

Well, I could definitely visualize you characters and your scenes. You were quite descriptive. You drew your reader from start to finish. Good job. Good luck with your CHARACTERS contest entry.

Thank you for sharing...Penny

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 Comment Written 01-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016

Thank you, Penny, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from light

Excellent

Although very gory, it was n interesting story and I stayed with it to the end.I hope the next scam is not so bloody.
Elaine

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 Comment Written 01-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016

I placed a violence warning on it now. Sorry if it offended you.

reply by light on 01-Jul-2016

I wasn't offended. Just an old lady attitude.