thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "A reason to smile"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
31 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
This certainly made me smile, and you have the proper syllable count required.
Good luck in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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This certainly made me smile, and you have the proper syllable count required.
Good luck in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 12-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
Thank you for reviewing and your comment,I appreciate it Glad it made you smile,Keep smiling,God bless
Comment from Susanjohn
Beautiful with a powerful message. That picture is lovely! great job on this, enjoyed reading very much!! I'm smiling!! :-))))
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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Beautiful with a powerful message. That picture is lovely! great job on this, enjoyed reading very much!! I'm smiling!! :-))))
Comment Written 12-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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Thank you for taking the time to review and comment I do so appreciate it.I'm glad you are smiling.Have a great night God Bless SANDY
Comment from l.raven
I'm smiling ear to ear...what a beautiful poem...with a stunning picture...so very nicely written...we do have a lot to be grateful to god for...good luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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I'm smiling ear to ear...what a beautiful poem...with a stunning picture...so very nicely written...we do have a lot to be grateful to god for...good luck in the contest...
Comment Written 12-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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Thank you for taking the time to review and comment,I appreciate it.Yes we do have a lot to be grateful for.God Bless Sandy
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Hi Sandy, you are so very welcome...always...xxoo Linda
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
= Stunning artwork to complement your 5.7.5 perfectly.
= Well penned and presented entry. Good luck in the contest.
= Oh, and yes ... I smiled. (*<*)
(*<*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-Down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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Hi,
= Stunning artwork to complement your 5.7.5 perfectly.
= Well penned and presented entry. Good luck in the contest.
= Oh, and yes ... I smiled. (*<*)
(*<*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-Down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax
Comment Written 12-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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Thank you for reviewing and comment.I appreciate it.Glad to know you smiled.God Bless.Sandy
Comment from mvbrooks
Effective use of the three lines and syllable limitations. Just a thought--the use of periods seems distracting as a period is a full stop and these three lines/three thoughts might flow better with a minor pause--consider replacing the line 1 and line 2 periods (full stop) with commas (minor pause).
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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Effective use of the three lines and syllable limitations. Just a thought--the use of periods seems distracting as a period is a full stop and these three lines/three thoughts might flow better with a minor pause--consider replacing the line 1 and line 2 periods (full stop) with commas (minor pause).
Comment Written 12-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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Thank you for taking the time to review and comment.I appreciate it .Thank you for the advice,I will make the change.God Bless.Sandy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A well-written fun 5-7-5 poem. We acknowledge Jesus died for us but He has also risen and that is enough reason to smile each day, and thank God.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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A well-written fun 5-7-5 poem. We acknowledge Jesus died for us but He has also risen and that is enough reason to smile each day, and thank God.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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Exactly, Thank you for your review and comment.I appreciate it.I agree with you that is reason enough to smile.God Bless
Comment from P1
yes you made me smile.
such a lovely short piece
thank you for reminding me
of this and a pleasure to read
and review your words. good luck
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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yes you made me smile.
such a lovely short piece
thank you for reminding me
of this and a pleasure to read
and review your words. good luck
Comment Written 12-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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Thank you for reviewing and commenting I do appreciate it.I am glad you smiled. God Bless. Sandy
Comment from foxangie123
This is so very lovely and a most wonderful five seven five. I am smiling and giving you a six because this and Jesus are exceptional. Great witness.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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This is so very lovely and a most wonderful five seven five. I am smiling and giving you a six because this and Jesus are exceptional. Great witness.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review and comment,I also am thankful for the six stars.I do enjoy using the gift God gave me as a tool to witness.I am glad you are smiling.God Bless sandy
Comment from cumulus365
Yes, I agree, that this 5/7/5 style is very fun to write. The meaning of this poem just freely flows, the only restriction is syllables count and you met the count. Your illustration reminds us all that, in my understanding of His mission, his pain was more than what you have to endure today, no matter what it may be (i.e. accidentally flushed a pair of VVS1, half-a carat diamond earrings for a wedding present down the toilet, spouse (husband or wife) is lazy with house chores, kids drive you insane because of their wants, etc.) continue to smile that wonderful smile and remember to thank God that you have today to carry on your purpose for being here. I enjoy your short clip. Best.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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Yes, I agree, that this 5/7/5 style is very fun to write. The meaning of this poem just freely flows, the only restriction is syllables count and you met the count. Your illustration reminds us all that, in my understanding of His mission, his pain was more than what you have to endure today, no matter what it may be (i.e. accidentally flushed a pair of VVS1, half-a carat diamond earrings for a wedding present down the toilet, spouse (husband or wife) is lazy with house chores, kids drive you insane because of their wants, etc.) continue to smile that wonderful smile and remember to thank God that you have today to carry on your purpose for being here. I enjoy your short clip. Best.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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Thank you for reviewing and commenting.Yes with everything that goes on in our every day life no matter what it to shall pass,so lets just be grateful and keep on smiling.The life after this one is what I am looking forward to.God Bless Sandy
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Hi, You are welcome. Best.
Comment from Galactia
Hi
This is a great little 5'7,5 poem, perfect syllanle count across all lines. I am sure you are gonna make plenty of looked smile with this entry.
Great job and good luck
Regardstia
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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Hi
This is a great little 5'7,5 poem, perfect syllanle count across all lines. I am sure you are gonna make plenty of looked smile with this entry.
Great job and good luck
Regardstia
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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Thank you for your review and comment.I do appreciate it.God Bless you ,Sandy