Comment from Beara Bella

Exceptional

This poem is really good with the wording. I like it. It's different and that's what makes it so good. I appreciate the art of the wording so much.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

Well how bout dat...-smile-
Hello...I'm Michael, author of todays tutorial...haha...thank you very much. pleasure to make your aquatints. love to you...Michael

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Michael,

Again you've written a wonderful poem that tells a lot in few words. It was interesting to read and I look forward to whatever you plan to write next. Now it's time for me to try to write a story.

Kat

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Hey Mom...-smile-
ah thank you Beautiful....oh yea, well I cant wait to read it. You're stories are outstanding. let me know...love you Michael

reply by MizKat on 09-Jun-2016

Next I'll be posting a poem after the story I have up now ends. Then after the poem ends I'll post a story. I'll let you know when though. Love You, MumKat

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

Hi to one of my favourite fanstorian poet.

A question....
Me ocean or my ocean?

To be honest i am not sure if it's all the tablets the doctors have given me for my foot surgery, but this poem seemed to confuse me.

First paragraph, i see you were happy, then something caused saddness to occupy both thoughts and emotion and you kind of dwelled on it.

Swimming window of soul?....confusing. .

Swirling thoughts going through you head, does it mean?

Stanza 4, total confusment, not sure what you are trying to say.

Regards
Tia Attwood

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 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Hey Tia...-smile-
this could be called raving lunacy...or the subconscious musings of genuine genius...howbeit, your review seems to lean toward bachelor number one....and its understandable...I live inside an artist's head...enough said...? no...well....okay let's see if we can piece this together...-smile-..."windows of the soul"...are the "eyes" at least on planet far away. So....that should help...-wink- ah I have evolved into a stress free writing style....where I approach next project empty as a dry sponge, thirsty for lets see. So I dress in silk robes, pour the sherry, and become the naked thrill of the pulse of life, where I find my take me there tune...and begin. when it ends...I look...see...? and I like you, piece together what God has given....-smile-...its relaxing isn't it...? Seriously...I like to write just what I'm feeling in the moment...perhaps an experience a song reminds. If you really want to know what it meant to me...it was a man....looking in a mirror into his eyes...and remembering, conversing in his head...even hoping perhaps even convincing himself....that love is trustworthy this time. -headtilt-...smile-...look I been writing in structure , I'm just a lil' stressed out...I just needed a break today...I wont do it again I promise Tia...sorry.... love to you...Michael

reply by Galactia on 08-Jun-2016

Ooohhhh!
Windows of the soul = eyes . Of course it does, makes perfect sence. I did say...it could have been the meds the doctors gave me lol. I just got told its long weekend so i am stucl in here until next tuesday :(

Thanks for explaining
Regards
Tia

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

well at least you got meds...-headtilt-
haha...sorry kid for the temporal pain in feet...but like my poetry...it can only get better...-smile-

reply by Galactia on 08-Jun-2016

Lol well thats where my brain is today, in both my sore feet. Your poems are fine, you even gave it away with your tittle, you couldn't simplify it anymore, i am a little dense tiday, sorry lol.

Regards
Tia

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

I knew you cared about me...-smile-...night pretty Lady-

reply by Galactia on 09-Jun-2016

Hugs :))