Christine's Poems
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Comment from William Ross
Nice write on Cat for the prompt, I don't know her all that well, except that she holds the number 1 spot for poets. Good luck on this and have a good day
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Nice write on Cat for the prompt, I don't know her all that well, except that she holds the number 1 spot for poets. Good luck on this and have a good day
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Hi William .Thanks for your review always good to hear from you. Cat is an amazing poet and writes every day so read some of her work. I enjoyed writing this one for her Cheers
Comment from yoel1
Wonderful. Giving personality to each cat breed. I learned about different cats and who they may be like humans with different personalities too. Nice to slip by unnoticed to the seeing eye. Really enjoyed the rhyming rhyme of your words. Will read it out loud for more appreciation.
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Wonderful. Giving personality to each cat breed. I learned about different cats and who they may be like humans with different personalities too. Nice to slip by unnoticed to the seeing eye. Really enjoyed the rhyming rhyme of your words. Will read it out loud for more appreciation.
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Hi youl1 Thanks very much for reading and reviewing my contest poem for I am Cat who is a terrific author and very diverse so the many different types of Cat breeds suit her well iam pleased you enjoyed my rhyming rhythm Cheers
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you are greatly welcome
Comment from candyfink
This is a nicely written poem that describes a strong woman.......... She's a brave soul ........... thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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This is a nicely written poem that describes a strong woman.......... She's a brave soul ........... thank you for sharing
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Hi candybarr. i am pleased you stopped by for a read of my Cat poem and yes she is a strong woman and so entertaining Cheers muchly
Comment from AnnieDawn
This is beautifully done and is really descriptive of how I have viewed her from what I have read that she has written. She will be very pleased when she reads this poem as it is very complimentary. Great job and great poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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This is beautifully done and is really descriptive of how I have viewed her from what I have read that she has written. She will be very pleased when she reads this poem as it is very complimentary. Great job and great poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Hi AnnieDawn. Yes I don't think you could mistake Cats unique qualities and I hope she likes my effort. Thanls for your good luck wishes and I am grateful for your comments. Cheers
Comment from Mabaker
Oh, that was gorgeous. Not being a poet sometimes I'm stumped for words to decently clad a review. No such shortage here. This was so lovely I read it out aloud to hubby. "Not too bad." Said he. I love cats any cat rates high with me. Regards Mabaker
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Oh, that was gorgeous. Not being a poet sometimes I'm stumped for words to decently clad a review. No such shortage here. This was so lovely I read it out aloud to hubby. "Not too bad." Said he. I love cats any cat rates high with me. Regards Mabaker
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Hi Mabaker. many thanks for reading and reviewing my poem for I am Cat. and I am pleased your husbamd thought it not bad and thank you sir LOL. This Cat is very unique Cheers for a lovely comment Cheers
Comment from tony bronk
She could be my male cat Buddy's sister, for their personalities sure are similar. She seems wonderful and amusing like all hell! You are very fortunate! Great, funny, witty poem. Tony Bronk
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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She could be my male cat Buddy's sister, for their personalities sure are similar. She seems wonderful and amusing like all hell! You are very fortunate! Great, funny, witty poem. Tony Bronk
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Hi Tony . Thanks very much for your review and Cat is quote wonderful and amusing I am glad you liked my tribute to her Cheers
Comment from Amy Greta
Excellent poem about I am Cat! I love all the different breed references, the rhymes are perfect, the flow and rhythm are upbeat and prance along just like a cat on display:)
One (I believe) typo is in the first line "out" should be "our".
My favorite line in:
"And with her pen she steals your mind
with words that are profound."
So true and so cleverly conveyed!
I love your poem!
Amy
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reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Excellent poem about I am Cat! I love all the different breed references, the rhymes are perfect, the flow and rhythm are upbeat and prance along just like a cat on display:)
One (I believe) typo is in the first line "out" should be "our".
My favorite line in:
"And with her pen she steals your mind
with words that are profound."
So true and so cleverly conveyed!
I love your poem!
Amy
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Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Hi Amy. and thank you so much for reading and reviewing my Cat poem. I wanted to showcase her unique qualities and I am so pleased you loved this. Also thanks for the spag pick up I have dorrected this out/our. A big Cheers to you Christine😃
Comment from maryvellef
Great witty poem. With words well- searched and chosen to accommodate subject. And it purr,,,inggly rhymes smoothly too that it is amusing and pleasant to read or recite it. Thanks so much.
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Great witty poem. With words well- searched and chosen to accommodate subject. And it purr,,,inggly rhymes smoothly too that it is amusing and pleasant to read or recite it. Thanks so much.
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Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Hi maryvellef. Many thanks for your review and lovely words for my Cat poem .This author is so inspiring and diverse I wanted to do her justice Cheers Christine😃