Baby Horton Hears Who
This is about waiting for the baby to be born.31 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A well-written poem in anticipation for baby Horton to be born. The unborn baby already heard the voice of mommy, daddy and granny, can't wait to hold that bundle in her arms.
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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A well-written poem in anticipation for baby Horton to be born. The unborn baby already heard the voice of mommy, daddy and granny, can't wait to hold that bundle in her arms.
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
Comment from William Ross
that's cute and congrats on the grandchild. nicely done an baby Horton, I can see how and why you came up with this for the name sake. good luck and have a good day
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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that's cute and congrats on the grandchild. nicely done an baby Horton, I can see how and why you came up with this for the name sake. good luck and have a good day
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Thank you for your encouragement.
Comment from create4christ
I love this! I'm a grandma too, so this is precious to me. I like how you use rhyme, rhythm, and description to help us hear who your baby, Horton, hears. It is really sweet. Good luck on your grandparent poem contest entry. This is well done.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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I love this! I'm a grandma too, so this is precious to me. I like how you use rhyme, rhythm, and description to help us hear who your baby, Horton, hears. It is really sweet. Good luck on your grandparent poem contest entry. This is well done.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.
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You're welcome
Comment from Susanjohn
OH I get it!! very clever with the name!! What's not to love about this piece!! love the last line!! Enjoyed reading this very much! Good luck with the contest! :-))
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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OH I get it!! very clever with the name!! What's not to love about this piece!! love the last line!! Enjoyed reading this very much! Good luck with the contest! :-))
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Thank you for the upbeat review.
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Best wishes for a win ... this is an absolutely wonderful poem.
It raises high the banner of humanity.
It praises the God in whose image we are made.
It gives credence to the life that is so precious inside the womb.
A grandchild is indeed a gift from God...
Nicely done,
:-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Best wishes for a win ... this is an absolutely wonderful poem.
It raises high the banner of humanity.
It praises the God in whose image we are made.
It gives credence to the life that is so precious inside the womb.
A grandchild is indeed a gift from God...
Nicely done,
:-) Carolyn
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Thank you for your high praise and also for the 6th star.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi,
"Baby Horton Hears Who" is an excellent celebration of the birth of a child. The alliteration works. The rhyme is simple and good. The poetic flow is excellent. The theme of different things a new born hears is carried through creatively." Love songs rock that baby boy" is a fresh metaphor. Good luck in the contest.
Your friend and colleague.
Preston
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Hi,
"Baby Horton Hears Who" is an excellent celebration of the birth of a child. The alliteration works. The rhyme is simple and good. The poetic flow is excellent. The theme of different things a new born hears is carried through creatively." Love songs rock that baby boy" is a fresh metaphor. Good luck in the contest.
Your friend and colleague.
Preston
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Thank you for your detailed review and positive words.
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
This is a very good entry into the "You're having a grand child" contest. Enjoyed the humor and the implied reference to Dr. Suess' rhymes. I live very near (about 2 miles) from Dr. Suess' home on Mulberry Street. Nice rhythm and rhyme and great content. Wish you luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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This is a very good entry into the "You're having a grand child" contest. Enjoyed the humor and the implied reference to Dr. Suess' rhymes. I live very near (about 2 miles) from Dr. Suess' home on Mulberry Street. Nice rhythm and rhyme and great content. Wish you luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Thank you for being in tune with my poem.
Comment from enitsalemap
Nice poem about a bundle about to arrive. Good rhyme good meter, word pictures are pleasant and cozy. All in all a very well done poem. I know what a joy it is both as a mother and a grandma to have the baby on the way.
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Nice poem about a bundle about to arrive. Good rhyme good meter, word pictures are pleasant and cozy. All in all a very well done poem. I know what a joy it is both as a mother and a grandma to have the baby on the way.
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Thank you for such a positive review.
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you are welcome
Comment from cumulus365
Nicely done with your own experience that you will have to pen it as a poem. Three stanzas easy to read and follow. The rhyming of abab is always enjoyable to read. Congratulations. Best.
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Nicely done with your own experience that you will have to pen it as a poem. Three stanzas easy to read and follow. The rhyming of abab is always enjoyable to read. Congratulations. Best.
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Thank you for your generous review.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Awww, how very sweet, and moving!
You can just picture Mama, Daddy, and Nana, waiting for the grandbaby to appear.
It is a long wait, and so very worth it.
Well done,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Awww, how very sweet, and moving!
You can just picture Mama, Daddy, and Nana, waiting for the grandbaby to appear.
It is a long wait, and so very worth it.
Well done,
Rhonda
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Thank you for the good words.