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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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Sometimes people can be arrogant without knowing they are because they believe they are just themselves and no one dare telling them they are not always right.

 Comment Written 05-May-2016


reply by the author on 05-May-2016
    Hi Sandra, Yes some people can be very arrogant, but I hope I'm not just having a bit of fun and Thank you for reading and reviewing this for me. Cheers
Comment from dmt1967
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This poem made me smile as I can think of several people like this lol. I enjoyed reading it and thought the head statue was a well thought out picture for this poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 05-May-2016


reply by the author on 05-May-2016
    Hi dmt1967, I am flad you smiled and yes I also know a couple of these people. I was so happy when I came across this image. I alway try to get one that suits my work and loved this one Ha Ha. Cheers for your kind words and good luck message
Comment from Margaret Ford
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This is clever work that I enjoyed reading, so I read it several times. Sometimes this type of poem seems forced, but this one seems natural. And you've selected terrific art that supports your theme. In the fourth line from the bottom, I think you have a typo. You probably meant to say "every" instead of "ever." Thanks for the fun read and good luck with the contest! Margaret

 Comment Written 04-May-2016


reply by the author on 05-May-2016
    Hi Margaret. So many thanks for your fabulous review and for giving away to me a six star rating. I am really thrilled you lliked this so much. It did flow out once I started and I am pleased with such a great response and I was very happy to have found this image and snapped it up quickly. I had fun writing this and Many Cheers for you good luck message. 😃
Comment from sage17611
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They could, but who cares? This is a really nice flowing poem. I like that the poem relates to a self evaluation of someone, and poses a question at the end. Very well written different approach. Good job, good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 04-May-2016


reply by the author on 05-May-2016
    Hi safe17611 Ha Ha Who cares indeed I had fun with this prompt and probably know one or two people like this Ha Ha. I always try to be a bit different and Thanks for your great review and good luck wishes. Cheers
Comment from William Ross
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hahaha very good, great job on arrogance, not me really. this should do great on the prompt. good luck on the wit and humor on this one.

 Comment Written 04-May-2016


reply by the author on 05-May-2016
    Hi William. Well what else can one say with a prompt like this Ha Ha I had some fun thinking up this and glad you enjoyed this Cheers for your good luck wishes also
Comment from Lisa Deverick
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Your acrostic poem on Arrogance is quite clever. A comical read for sure. The picture that you chose to portray it perfect! well done

 Comment Written 04-May-2016


reply by the author on 05-May-2016
    Hi Lisa. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my attempt at this prompt I loved this picture also and smiled when I found it Ha Ha. Glad you like this Cheers
Comment from JZ530
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I wish that I could reach your level of self-worth and self-confidence.
I to like writing reflected pieces about my character and personality. I've enjoyed reading your poem because it reminds me of my own writing style. Your poem is the definition of self-confidence! People can be right sometimes, but most of the time people are judgmental.


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 Comment Written 04-May-2016


reply by the author on 04-May-2016
    Hi JZ530 . Thank you for you review and comments. It was written with tongue in cheek and I am pleased it reminded you of your writing style. Yes many are judgmental but then not everyone can be as good as we are LOL Cheers
Comment from Joyce Long
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Best wishes for the Acrostic: Arrogance contest. It is very cute and seems to cover the idea of arrogance very well. Given my superior view that can't be considered Self-importance. I enjoyed this.
Joyce 05-04-16

 Comment Written 04-May-2016


reply by the author on 04-May-2016
    Ha Ha Joyce. I am glad you enjoyed my little effort and I did have fun writing this I hooe everyone see's the truth LOL Cheers my friend
Comment from Jonadab Ezerie
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The artwork you choose to go with your poem is awesome. Your message comes through loud and clear. The art work complemented well the message of the poem

 Comment Written 04-May-2016


reply by the author on 04-May-2016
    Hi Sealord, Yes I searched for a while to find this and smiled as soon as I saw this image and snapped it up. Thanks for your review and great rating much appreciated Cheers
Comment from foxangie123
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This is so very unique and creative. Wow. It is going to be hard to beat as an entry to this contest. Thanks for entering by the way. This rocks.

 Comment Written 04-May-2016


reply by the author on 04-May-2016
    Hi foxangie123 .I hope this wins it is so good Ha Ha Ha, No thank you very much for your positive comments and I am pleased you thought it creative I am certainly unique LOL Cheers my friend