May blossoms
poem 3-5-322 total reviews
Comment from jusylee72
I have trouble judging these short poems. I like the content that leads this to the beginning of summer. The words fit nicely together and definitely depict the scene in the picture. very nice.
reply by the author on 09-May-2016
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I have trouble judging these short poems. I like the content that leads this to the beginning of summer. The words fit nicely together and definitely depict the scene in the picture. very nice.
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 09-May-2016
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Yes it is a little difficult with this shorter format - thanks for reading zanya
Comment from rspoet
This is a solid entry for the contest
with exact syllables at 3-5-3
Excellent imagery in blossoms/scent
Very nice descriptive poem
Excellent photograph to match poem
Well done
Good luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 09-May-2016
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This is a solid entry for the contest
with exact syllables at 3-5-3
Excellent imagery in blossoms/scent
Very nice descriptive poem
Excellent photograph to match poem
Well done
Good luck in the contest
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 09-May-2016
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Thanks for reading and the critique zanya