Hope
Little life lesson82 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Hope" is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. This poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Love, faith and hope is a gift from God.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
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"Hope" is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. This poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Love, faith and hope is a gift from God.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
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Many thanks...
Comment from Narelle Bannister
This poem gets me thinking about how we all sometimes feel that life is not fair or too hard and that someone else out there is doing it tougher than us. Something we all should consider when feeling sorry for ourselves. Your words ring true in that we should all get off our arses and make our lives the best we can. Very well written!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
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This poem gets me thinking about how we all sometimes feel that life is not fair or too hard and that someone else out there is doing it tougher than us. Something we all should consider when feeling sorry for ourselves. Your words ring true in that we should all get off our arses and make our lives the best we can. Very well written!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
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Thank you very much
Comment from royowen
You're absulutely correct, love, hope, compassion and faith are all verbs, something that one does, they are not neutral, they are living and active, they are an outward expression of what is happening on the outside, James says "Show me your deeds, and I will show you my faith by my deeds" James 2:18. Well done, beautifully composed, a great decriptive text, a great truth in this work, articulate in aabb rhyming, well done. Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
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You're absulutely correct, love, hope, compassion and faith are all verbs, something that one does, they are not neutral, they are living and active, they are an outward expression of what is happening on the outside, James says "Show me your deeds, and I will show you my faith by my deeds" James 2:18. Well done, beautifully composed, a great decriptive text, a great truth in this work, articulate in aabb rhyming, well done. Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 22-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
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Thanks for the review
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Most welcome
Comment from Serendipity!
I'm not sure what you would define as 'blind hope' but hope keeps me going, it keeps me active and cheerful, but I certainly agree that getting out there and doing something for our fellow man is a good anecdote.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
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I'm not sure what you would define as 'blind hope' but hope keeps me going, it keeps me active and cheerful, but I certainly agree that getting out there and doing something for our fellow man is a good anecdote.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
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Blind hope is passive while giving hope to another is active
Comment from l.raven
I love this poem....it has a wonderful massage in it...make yourself feel better by giving...and that is sooooo very true...I love the story your poem tells...so very well written...******and a perfect picture...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
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I love this poem....it has a wonderful massage in it...make yourself feel better by giving...and that is sooooo very true...I love the story your poem tells...so very well written...******and a perfect picture...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
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Thank you much
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you are so very welcome...xxoo Linda
Comment from foxangie123
This is so very fabulous from the tippie top down to the lines. I recognize your writing and I will be there at voting. Excellent penning friend.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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This is so very fabulous from the tippie top down to the lines. I recognize your writing and I will be there at voting. Excellent penning friend.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Great insight...John
Comment from daisyjones7
This didactic poem made my day especially since its one of those days for me that I need to be hopeful to go on. I really like your rhymes, did you plan to use rhyme for every line before you started writing this?
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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This didactic poem made my day especially since its one of those days for me that I need to be hopeful to go on. I really like your rhymes, did you plan to use rhyme for every line before you started writing this?
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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THANKS
Comment from TPAC
Okay. Super expression of this write start, writer swing of blade precise, grip of the throat growl: then foul end. Just my opinion: not gospel.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Okay. Super expression of this write start, writer swing of blade precise, grip of the throat growl: then foul end. Just my opinion: not gospel.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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THANKS
Comment from Lannell912
Hope is but a word ,no more powerful than the word love. Hopeless is just a word yet many say they can feel all of them. Emotions put into verb is what makes them more. We can not make everything OK at lease get up and head that way !
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Hope is but a word ,no more powerful than the word love. Hopeless is just a word yet many say they can feel all of them. Emotions put into verb is what makes them more. We can not make everything OK at lease get up and head that way !
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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THANKS
Comment from c_lucas
Hope is there, but to what degree. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Hope is there, but to what degree. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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THANKS Charlie