Christine's Poems
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Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautiful philosophical sentiment dear anonymous! A very simple sentiment that has a profound meaning.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
This is a beautiful philosophical sentiment dear anonymous! A very simple sentiment that has a profound meaning.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Rebekka,, What a lovely review for my 7 words I am pleased you though it worthy and thanks for your good luck message Cheers
Comment from Judy Couch
We said. You used only a few words but conveyed a great message. A smile really can make someones day. Your poem actually makes sense which is more than can be said for a lot of these very short ones.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
We said. You used only a few words but conveyed a great message. A smile really can make someones day. Your poem actually makes sense which is more than can be said for a lot of these very short ones.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Judy, Thank you so much for your lovely words for my 7 words. I often smile at a stranger and gain one in return it makes me feel happy. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing so with a smile I send you good Cheers
Comment from Writeling
Hi, This has met the brief with its sharp impact. I like the use of capitals to make your point and the picture is a perfect illustration of the poem.
With best wishes, Writeling
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
Hi, This has met the brief with its sharp impact. I like the use of capitals to make your point and the picture is a perfect illustration of the poem.
With best wishes, Writeling
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Writeling. Many thanks for having a read of my 7 words and a smile does make a difference . I am pleased you like my capitals I though they would highlight the two most important words. Cheers and a smile back to you
Comment from William Ross
Yes, a great 7 word or less on this prompt smile cost nothing means a so much is for sure, great job and good luck on this. have a good day
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
Yes, a great 7 word or less on this prompt smile cost nothing means a so much is for sure, great job and good luck on this. have a good day
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi William/ I am smiling as I read your review so thank you for reading my words. I appreciate you time and send a smile to you
Comment from Autumn Splendour
In seven words you have surfaced an adage that is so true. We all thrive on encouragement and a smile can mean a lot especially to the weak and downtrodden.
The image fits the intent of the poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
In seven words you have surfaced an adage that is so true. We all thrive on encouragement and a smile can mean a lot especially to the weak and downtrodden.
The image fits the intent of the poem. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Autumn Splendour. I feel a smile is all it takes to create a good feeling so I try to do it often and it is often the downtrodden to whom I smile to, So thank you for your review and encouraging words. With cheers and a smile back to you
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
What great advice in such a small piece.
In seven words you have given the world a smile and the picture you chose really adds to the smile.
It is free and really makes someones day.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
What great advice in such a small piece.
In seven words you have given the world a smile and the picture you chose really adds to the smile.
It is free and really makes someones day.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Barbara, I am glad you liked my smile and the picture seems to make these words stand out also. I hope simple but effective and I always try to smile to people as I pass by. Costs me nothing but makes me feel good . Cheers for reading and sending you a smile.
Comment from tony bronk
You certainly have said a lot concisely with your 7 chosen words here. You did a very good job of getting creative with it as well. Have a happy day! Tony
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
You certainly have said a lot concisely with your 7 chosen words here. You did a very good job of getting creative with it as well. Have a happy day! Tony
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Tony, With a smile I send you a big thanks for your review and encouraging words. I will have a happy day same to you 😃
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous :)
*I am smiling* Can you see? lol I like your entry. There are not too many in this competition. I agree with you, a smile goes a long way. It can change your whole day's attitude. Good job!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
Hello, anonymous :)
*I am smiling* Can you see? lol I like your entry. There are not too many in this competition. I agree with you, a smile goes a long way. It can change your whole day's attitude. Good job!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Gypsy, Yes I can see you smiling and here's one back to you 😄Thank you for stopping by to read my poem and have a great day .
Comment from mfowler
These tiny poems continue to amaze me with
their diversity and communication of wisdom.
This is no exception. Yes, a smile takes quite a
few muscles to get across, but it's fun and it's
free. Yet, something this simple can change lives.
Think of the person depressed, and wandering the
streets. A stranger inadvertently smiles, says good
morning. Who knows what that act of kindness
might produce? I wish you well with your wisdom.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
These tiny poems continue to amaze me with
their diversity and communication of wisdom.
This is no exception. Yes, a smile takes quite a
few muscles to get across, but it's fun and it's
free. Yet, something this simple can change lives.
Think of the person depressed, and wandering the
streets. A stranger inadvertently smiles, says good
morning. Who knows what that act of kindness
might produce? I wish you well with your wisdom.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi mfowler. Yes a smile can change ones daily outlook and I try to smile at a stranger and this is what I did today and received a smile back and then I came up with this for this prompt .Many thanks for your review and kind words😃
Comment from Liberty Justice
So darling and cute. Poet is right doesn't cost anything to smile. Smiling helps lift some person's feelings. Photo is symbol used for smile. liberty justice
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
So darling and cute. Poet is right doesn't cost anything to smile. Smiling helps lift some person's feelings. Photo is symbol used for smile. liberty justice
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi liberty justice, I am glad you liked my smile and here is another one for you for your time and review Thank you . 😃