Comment from brownies

Excellent

It is raw and refreshing. It is right and revealing of our need for love and Who meets that need. Our hope is in Christ. Our sanctification is in Christ. Our eternal life is in Christ. Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2016

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Micheal, This is another brilliant addition to your ever growing and interesting portfolio, This free verse spiritual poem has a rhythm and flow of it's own, even without the music you can feel the beat as you read my friend.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016

Hi Erick...-smile-
ah thank you...I thought it beautiful when I read it...ya know after I wrote it of course. Thank you man. love to you...michael

reply by Eric1 on 10-Jul-2016

You are most welcome my friend.

Comment from Gianinas

Excellent

This is an elegant and complex art piece, not just a poem. I enjoyed listening to the rhythm dictated by the music, while reading the words of the poem. No punctuation and no verbs is not generally my cup of tea, but this one really works. I enjoyed the entire experience. Thanks,

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2016

I love that word "elegant"....immediate I think delicate.
Hello...-smile-...and thank you...what a great thing to hear you say. oh....-knucklebite-....ew....thats gonna be a puzzle then....ah will figure it out...-smile-... well I'm glad you did. love to you. michael

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

A very stunning poem with absolutely exceptional artwork to accompany it. It gives the reviewer the need to ponder what has been voiced and determine their thoughts on the content. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016

Hi Sue...-smile-
ah thanks...i like this one a lot. love to you...Michael

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Very nice, I like this, We are all saved if we believe in him and live within him. the rosary is a great free verse and spiritual piece. Thanks for the share

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016

Hi Bill...-smile-
I thank you Sir. appreciate your enjoying. love to you...Michael

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem. Yes, we need someone else to love and cherish in our lives. Sometimes we have it all and it is taken away from us, only to wish we could have it again.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016

Hi...-smile-
amen...that we do. glad you enjoyed. love to you...Michael

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Very nice description of the ordered prayer the rosary. it has its purpose and when fulfilled it brings comfort to the Catholic Soul. I think you did an excellent job on this.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016

Hi...-smile-
thanks very much. appreciate you enjoying. love to you...Michael

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Faith poem and bare boob. No more shocking than all those cherubs in the paintings of old masters. Your free verse is starting to make sense. That worries me...

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2016

ha...well what do you know.
well no worries...apparently I'm back at the ol' Hieroglyphics again. I had to raise the bar...I've been here. love to you . michael

Comment from An Awakened Heart

Excellent

Many thoughts and emotions come to bear in this wonderful piece. Nice use of words and imagery. You tell a story, full of emotion, bits at a time.

Thank you for posting.


Bless you.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2016

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

No one writes poetry like you. It is distinctive. You filled your verse with sharp images and sounds:

"cherished breast suckled from
nurtured soul spiritual
beautiful sustains us..."

This balanced collection of stanzas is almost like stream of conscious or a cubic collage. Words and images are juxtaposed for a synergistic effect.

You created images of sanctity and nurturing.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2016