Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

short simple and to the point. not a great fan of lunes but i certainly can picture yours as well as the assistance of the picture

dip

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2016

Comment from Caressa_08

Excellent

These lunes are a joy to read, as not too lengthy and this one, too, a sign of Spring. And, just can imagine how beautiful that truly must be to see all the different varieties of tulips and a nice way to spend some getaway time.

Thanks so Much for Sharing,,,And, Best Wishes for your entry...Caressa_08

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2016

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

A lovely picture that brought me running to read this contest entry by a mystery poet :) I love tulip season. How perfect that there is a Holland in Michigan lol! I'd love to see the tulips in both Hollands. Best wishes in this contest!

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016

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Comment from winnona

Excellent

Your choice of photo and background color are good and they completed the poem. The words flow together creating the message of the poem to the reader. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016

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Comment from Phoenix Rysing

Excellent

I've never been a big fan of lunes, but i do like this piece along with the photo. You did a good job. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016

Comment from Edgar Terrance

Excellent

Beautiful poem and picture. and I would love to see the sight of tulips for 5 miles. I should visit Holland, Michigan then.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This must be a most glorious event! What a stunning tulip that is in your picture. I have been to the Netherlands once or twice during tulip time. What a wonderful sight those colourful fields are.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine lune for the contest
Exact syllables at 5-3-5
Good imagery with the tulips/festival
May seems a long way off
but the tulips are worth waiting for
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Beautiful photo.
-Thanks for the author notes.
-Interesting that the town is called Holland.
-Good format.
-I can imagine that the lanes are lovely.
-Enjoy the parade!

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

There is a beautiful image, I can see all the tulips around Holland, Michigan. Your lune makes the reader feel good and appreciate the beauty of these flowers. Spring has made her presence known.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016

Thank you