A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Raw"Assorted poems of love
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Comment from JTStone
That is some piece of art you found, girl.
It strikes a bit close to home though. My ex used to do photo studies of nude women in trees during her failed artist period. Your poem kind of describes her post divorce attitude toward me.
Funny thing though, she was the one doing the running around prior to the separation.
Thanks for sharing this artistic interlude.
Jimmy
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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That is some piece of art you found, girl.
It strikes a bit close to home though. My ex used to do photo studies of nude women in trees during her failed artist period. Your poem kind of describes her post divorce attitude toward me.
Funny thing though, she was the one doing the running around prior to the separation.
Thanks for sharing this artistic interlude.
Jimmy
Comment Written 20-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Awww, sorry this brought bad memories, Jimmy! Comere and I will give ya a hug :) Hugs always work for me!
I so appreciate you taking your valuable time to spend with me! Thank you :)
Missy
Comment from fastdigits
The picture you have chosen meshes
brilliantly with your alluring words
that bespeak the emotions in your
poetic portrayal of the alluring
lady who has been betrayed, and
now be careful, because her love
has turned to jealousy, and there
is nothing more dangerous than a
lady who has been scorned.
Well done. You have won
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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The picture you have chosen meshes
brilliantly with your alluring words
that bespeak the emotions in your
poetic portrayal of the alluring
lady who has been betrayed, and
now be careful, because her love
has turned to jealousy, and there
is nothing more dangerous than a
lady who has been scorned.
Well done. You have won
Comment Written 20-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Hi, my friend...thanks for this lovely review. I am delighted you accepted the challenge :) I admire your work!!
I hope you get tons of reviews :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Saradipidity
Whoa! Vengeful, sexy! Obsession... Nothing like a woman scorned. Too many of us can relate. You have without a doubt made a very powerful, bewitched message. Dark, mystical with a calculated determination. This scorned lover has had time to process the initial passionate emotional anger. It's turned into cold rage...
Love it!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Whoa! Vengeful, sexy! Obsession... Nothing like a woman scorned. Too many of us can relate. You have without a doubt made a very powerful, bewitched message. Dark, mystical with a calculated determination. This scorned lover has had time to process the initial passionate emotional anger. It's turned into cold rage...
Love it!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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I am just "over the moon" with your review, Saradipidity!! The picture just spoke to me and I had to get it out there :)
Again, thanks, hon :)
Missy
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You are very welcome!!
Comment from MLEaton
So glad I read this beautifully constructed and very passionate poem. The title is perfect and the presentation excellent. Very well done. I'm glad you were challenged ... you certainly rose to it!
Marion:)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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So glad I read this beautifully constructed and very passionate poem. The title is perfect and the presentation excellent. Very well done. I'm glad you were challenged ... you certainly rose to it!
Marion:)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Marion, thank you for this wonderful review :) If my partner in crime, fastdigits, ever posts his, I sincerely hope you will jump over and read his!
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment from jusylee72
Ok this was scary. I loved the evolution into madness. The first picture also enthralled me Interesting use of colors in the entire production. Really like it but out of six stars.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Ok this was scary. I loved the evolution into madness. The first picture also enthralled me Interesting use of colors in the entire production. Really like it but out of six stars.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Thanks, JL, I am glad you got the emotion I was going for :) If Fastdigits ever posts his...I hope you will look his up and read it as well. :)
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment from William Ross
Sounds almost something personal in the challenge, but this is really good, It's like watch out, has that power to it. great job enjoy the day.
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Sounds almost something personal in the challenge, but this is really good, It's like watch out, has that power to it. great job enjoy the day.
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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If "Fastdigits" ever posts, please go and read his :)
Thanks, William for your always encouraging review !
Smiling, have a great day yourself, William.
Missy
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I just read hers, both are very good, but yours has a much better presentation and feel of like i said power
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Aww thanks, William :)
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I just read hers, both very good yours tho has a better presentation and feel of power, to it.
Comment from Pantygynt
What a fantastic piece of artwork for an ekphrastic challenge. A real temptress of of the woods. She really is part of that tree. Soldiers could use that as a lesson in camouflage.
An then we get a stark but powerful pin e of short line free verse that is a s green as a forest grove with envy. Finally a terrible warning that all with an interest in her should heed.
Sent shivers down my spine.
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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What a fantastic piece of artwork for an ekphrastic challenge. A real temptress of of the woods. She really is part of that tree. Soldiers could use that as a lesson in camouflage.
An then we get a stark but powerful pin e of short line free verse that is a s green as a forest grove with envy. Finally a terrible warning that all with an interest in her should heed.
Sent shivers down my spine.
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Woooohooooo!! Thank you, Gynt!! I was worried I wouldn't do the piece justice :)
Missy