Seth Sloth
A Peach Picking Sloth29 total reviews
Comment from Bill O'Bier
A very nice poem-with great images. Your words are well chosen. The artwork was great for the theme of the poem.
Thanks for sharing--
Bill~
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A very nice poem-with great images. Your words are well chosen. The artwork was great for the theme of the poem.
Thanks for sharing--
Bill~
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016
Comment from William Ross
the peach picking sloth, Those tart unripe peachs Like the picuire with this cute buggers they are. Good luck on this and have a great day
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the peach picking sloth, Those tart unripe peachs Like the picuire with this cute buggers they are. Good luck on this and have a great day
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016
Comment from DonandVicki
Funny! How painful it must be passing those pits. Good use of alliteration all the way through this poem. Very witty and a real tounge twister.
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Funny! How painful it must be passing those pits. Good use of alliteration all the way through this poem. Very witty and a real tounge twister.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016
Comment from RodG
My granddaughter would love this poem because she recently saw a sloth in Costa Rica, and she loves words that start with the same letter. Purely fun poems are what keep children reading. Nicely done.
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My granddaughter would love this poem because she recently saw a sloth in Costa Rica, and she loves words that start with the same letter. Purely fun poems are what keep children reading. Nicely done.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2016
Comment from I am Cat
Rich in alliteration and imagery, this made me smile...
it starts with this adorable face
and then, of course, you follow through with one of my
favorite poetic devices... alliteration!
Well done and great luck in the contest, my dear! ;)
Cat
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Rich in alliteration and imagery, this made me smile...
it starts with this adorable face
and then, of course, you follow through with one of my
favorite poetic devices... alliteration!
Well done and great luck in the contest, my dear! ;)
Cat
Comment Written 10-Mar-2016
Comment from damommy
This is great! Makes me think of that sibilant(sp.) sound the sloth makes in the Ice Age movies.
It also makes a great tongue twister. 8-)
Photo is precious.
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This is great! Makes me think of that sibilant(sp.) sound the sloth makes in the Ice Age movies.
It also makes a great tongue twister. 8-)
Photo is precious.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2016
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well, never let it be said that, despite his pain, Seth sloth isn't smart, stealthy and slightly stingy. But what painful pit plucker worth his weight in peaches isn't, when you get right down to it?
Obviously, this witty 5-7-5 animal entry is an alliteration lover's wet dream, if you'll excuse the prurient pun.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
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Well, never let it be said that, despite his pain, Seth sloth isn't smart, stealthy and slightly stingy. But what painful pit plucker worth his weight in peaches isn't, when you get right down to it?
Obviously, this witty 5-7-5 animal entry is an alliteration lover's wet dream, if you'll excuse the prurient pun.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2016
Comment from Janet Foor
A delightful 5/7/5 poem. I loved the adorable picture. Whimsical and witty and fun poem. Excellent use of alliteration in each line. Very well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
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A delightful 5/7/5 poem. I loved the adorable picture. Whimsical and witty and fun poem. Excellent use of alliteration in each line. Very well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 10-Mar-2016
Comment from foxangie123
This is so very neat. When the picture popped up I thought he or she was looking me straight in the eyes like I was there. This is amazing and so much fun. Bravo..
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This is so very neat. When the picture popped up I thought he or she was looking me straight in the eyes like I was there. This is amazing and so much fun. Bravo..
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2016
