Comment from Nika2016

Excellent

Powerful poem. Unconditional love.
Flows.
Thoughtful
Entertaining
Great writing.....
All of us want this..
Good luck

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2016

Thank you for your great review and for sharing your thoughts. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Ahh yes the good and evil of love the give and take. You have expressed this well in your short poem. As long as we give more than we take.

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 Comment Written 08-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2016

Hello DonandVicki, Thank you for your great review and for sharing your thoughts. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer