A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "If"Assorted poems of love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Missy
= So sorry for your family's loss.
= Never easy, no matter their age.
= Take care, Lovely Southern Lady.
= Beautiful dedication to your aunt.
* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie <> Jax (*<*)
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Hi, Missy
= So sorry for your family's loss.
= Never easy, no matter their age.
= Take care, Lovely Southern Lady.
= Beautiful dedication to your aunt.
* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie <> Jax (*<*)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Hello, Jax :)
Thank you for being here, being a fan. I'll never take that for granted.
Hugs,
Missy
Comment from wiljacro
Hi! justafan, It is so sad when soul mates have to part, but your beautiful conception of what your Aunt Becky would have said to your Uncle Randy is so passionate and full of their shared personal memories that I am sure that your poem will be treasured forever. Well done!! wiljacro.
PS I wish I could have given it 10 stars. w.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Hi! justafan, It is so sad when soul mates have to part, but your beautiful conception of what your Aunt Becky would have said to your Uncle Randy is so passionate and full of their shared personal memories that I am sure that your poem will be treasured forever. Well done!! wiljacro.
PS I wish I could have given it 10 stars. w.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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How sweet you are "W". Thank you so much for this heartening review. I hope he feels as you say :)
Thanks also for the bling of the 6er.
Always justafan,
Missy
PS You review was a 10 in my book!!
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Hi! again, maybe you could hang those stars in your window and if you are feeling low then make a wish on one, I'm sure they'll cheer up your day. regards wiljacro.
Comment from Pantygynt
The short explanatory note was essential in this instance otherwise we might have thought you were planning something drastic. It is always difficult to get into the inner workings of the mind of another but you seem pretty certain that you've got it right here. the form of the poem, made up principally of tercets, enables you to look back on her life, through her eyes, one step at at a time.
A sad piece but exquisitely constructed.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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The short explanatory note was essential in this instance otherwise we might have thought you were planning something drastic. It is always difficult to get into the inner workings of the mind of another but you seem pretty certain that you've got it right here. the form of the poem, made up principally of tercets, enables you to look back on her life, through her eyes, one step at at a time.
A sad piece but exquisitely constructed.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Nope not me. I am of the mind...why do something so final for a temporary situation. Plus, I have seen the aftermath of "drastic" measures.
Thank you, sweetie for this lovely review.
Always,
Missy
Comment from scongrove
Beautiful Missy! :)
I loved ... loved the picture, but really loved you're words of dedication. I can tell you wrote straight from your heart. You have a warmth with your words that truly speak volumes. I'm glad to see you back!
Shana :)
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Beautiful Missy! :)
I loved ... loved the picture, but really loved you're words of dedication. I can tell you wrote straight from your heart. You have a warmth with your words that truly speak volumes. I'm glad to see you back!
Shana :)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Shana, Shana, Shana!! You brighten up my day, everytime I read a review from you. Thanks hon...I really needed it today.
Always,
Missy
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You're very welcome! :)
Comment from Douglas Paul
This is a touching tribute to your Aunt. I am sorry for your loss. I think this is well written and you love shines through. Very well done
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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This is a touching tribute to your Aunt. I am sorry for your loss. I think this is well written and you love shines through. Very well done
Comment Written 02-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Hello, Douglas, thank you for reading and leaving this complimentary review. I really appreciate it :)
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment from Joy Graham
So sorry to hear about your aunt's passing. The thought of closing our eyes for the last time is frightening.
My old ipad helped me read this poem. I had to enlarge the page to be able to read the fancy font in the pale pink. I did it, though. So I'm pleased with myself :)
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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So sorry to hear about your aunt's passing. The thought of closing our eyes for the last time is frightening.
My old ipad helped me read this poem. I had to enlarge the page to be able to read the fancy font in the pale pink. I did it, though. So I'm pleased with myself :)
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Sorry Joy, something has changed in the Editor since I last posted. I was not offered a background choice.Sorry you had a time reading this.
Missy
Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully written, easily read and heart warming. I am sorry you lost your Aunt. I pray Randy will be comforted. Patricia
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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This is beautifully written, easily read and heart warming. I am sorry you lost your Aunt. I pray Randy will be comforted. Patricia
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Thanks, Patricia. He is taking this very hard. Thankfully we are a huge family and lots of support around him :)
Always,
Missy