Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow

Excellent

Oh very cool. Happy couples are always fun. Great limerick and great photo of the two. Nice work. Sounds like everyone approves of this, doesn't always happen that way. Great news!

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016

yeah well appreciate you coming by. Her folks are tickled with Ben. I secretly think Louise (my wife's) brother wanted another son!

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A happy occasion and always time for celebration. I wish the young couple all the luck in their future ventures and a happy 21st birthday wish for Maddy.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016

Thanks Sandra. We have a lovely time at Niece's late 21st for us last night.

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

The young couple in the picture look very happy. This limerick is a great tribute to them. Glad you are writing poems again and the rhyme and meter are perfect. Keep it up.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016

Thanks Sis. I needed something like this to get me going.

Comment from Joyce Long

Excellent

Engagements are a very exciting time with all the excitement of a wedding. Sorry you had to miss the engagement party because of weather. This tribute to their engagement and their picture is vey nice. Thank you for sharing.
Joyce 02-10-16

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016

Hi Joyce it was Maddy's 21st big celebration we missed but we made up for it last night with just her family which suited us anyway. Engagement is coming real soon. Appreciate you coming by.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I'm sorry to hear you couldn't attend Maddy's twenty first Geoff, it seems you've had a lot of rain over there in NSW, you could send some over here you know! I remember my twenty first as if yesterday! Congrats on her and Ben's engagement too. Well done. Blessings Roy and Elaine,

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016

AMEn bro, we look forward to the Engagement party then the Wedding only in June...short time between. Something to share I am not sure how right her mother was...Maddy had this Happy Potter Necklace on last night, and her Mother commented" she is really into Harry Potter" seeing Maddy is a Sis in the Lord I pray that is not true as I believe HP and the Lord are at opposite poles if you get my drift.

reply by royowen on 10-Feb-2016

Well done, Love to you and Louise!

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016

HARRY POTTER duh!

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

A cute poem in limerick style. Great rhyme, and it flows very smoothly. Excellent rhyme. A lovely way to celebrate the engagement of this charming couple. Hope they'll be very happy. Too bad you couldn't attend the celebration, but your thoughts were with them. Getting around is often difficult for older folks. judi

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016

Hi Sis we attended a extra 21st for Maddy...the engagement is still to come but not far away and the wedding will be in June actually not a long engagement. thanks for coming by and the lovely review.

reply by judiverse on 10-Feb-2016

You're very welcome. Well, you should have lovely weather for the wedding. They look like a lovely couple. judi

Comment from pegesusunicorn

Excellent

Short and sweet, It is interesting how we can get so much information from something if it plays with the words just right..well Done
Peg

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016

Thanks Peg not sure we have met before. Appreciate your lovely review.