Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A good attempt. It seems easy, but when you try you see it is not all easy. At least it must also make some sense or it will fail. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016

Hi Samdra yes it is not as easy as it looks or sounds and I had fun with this one but probably need refinement LOL still I am glad that you had a read and as always appreciate you support and good luck wishes Cheers

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Well done Chrissy - you have met this challenge well. 'Looks easy - but is it' - well you made it look easy, but I suspect it is not. Well written with good advice on how to do it. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016

Hi Dorothy, I do so much appreciate your great support and lovely comments for my work . I couldn't help but have a go at this one LOL and thank you once again Cheers Christine😃

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016

Hi Dorothy Thanks for your comments and I hope my effort does meet requirement . I have had some good advice on this style for future reference and enjoyed trying something new to me Many thanks again warm Cheers to you Christine

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This poem is very good for a first attempt. I found it more like a sentence than a poem, though. These are hard to write and I do like your first attempt at it. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016

Hi dmt1967 Thanks for your time to read and review my first time attempt at this style. Not sure how it would go and I know what you mean they are harder than first thought but I had fun having a go Cheers for your good luck wishes

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good fits the prompt very well great for a first time. it;s witty and fun. Good luck in the contest with this. have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016

Hi William Thanks so much for your review Thought I would have a go and see if would meet requirement I a, glad you thouty it witty and fun appreciate your time and comments Cheers

Comment from scd41

Excellent

A nice two syllable per line poem simple and smooth flowing. If it is your first and you wrote it while whiling away the afternoon, it has come out very well. It's a positive effort unlike just lazing away.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016

Hi scd41, I appreciate your time to read and review my poem for this contest, it just seemed to come out and I thought I would see if it worked Ok so it was a well spent afternoon and to recieve your positive comments is lovely. Cheers for them

Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

Hi there,
If I had a six you would have it...
I think you nailed this contest entry and it also
made perfect sense to read.. You didn't just throw
words and syllables together to make it fit the form..
The free verse fits well if allowed...
Best wishes,
:-) Carolyn

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016

Hi Carolyn, Many thanks for your lovely review and rating, I tried to do something that met requirement but also flowed and made some sense. Your comments have made this worthwhile to post so a big thanks and Cheers for your support

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem. Your lines flow well. Good job with the prompt. I love the picture of the beautiful kitty. Your poem is upbeat and fun. I see no changes. Good job and best wishes in the contest. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016

Hi Jan Many thanks for reading and reviewing my poem for this contest and yes I loved the cat image and thought it suited my words so I am glad you liked it to. Cheers also for your best wishes and encouragement

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A nice entry in this, looks easy-but is it poetry contest, I think you've done well, it certainly seems to have followed the laid down format, so I think you done well, writing about the requirements of the contest, well done, good luck, blessing, Roy

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016

Hi Roy, Much appreciation for your words and good luck wishes for this contest. I had fun with this one and hope it does Ok Cheers

reply by royowen on 29-Jan-2016

Most welcome Christine

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016

😀Smiling

Comment from Linda Engel

Excellent

It is harder that you think to combine the right two syllable lines together to form a free verse thought in twelve lines or more. You did very well and I love the picture. He favors my cat, Collar. *need to get me one of those books*

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

Hi Linda, Thanks for you review and great rating for my Two Times poem I just came across this today and though OK here goes . I loved the cat too and thought he fitted my little effort nicely. Many Cheers

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Very good poem for a first try
I suspect it will be a first for most who enter
Each line has two syllables
It's easy
but one must try hard
you make it look easy
Great picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

Hi rspoet, Always in for a go at a new style and hope this worked Ok, it was fun to try anyway and Thanks so much for your review and rating and good luck wishes Cheers to you