Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Lovely artwork.
-Well written poem with effective imagery and good use of rhyme.
-It is a very good entry for the contest.
-Many lines stand out in this story you weave, but a couple that stand out are:
* "Don't worry, God, your favourite's safe with me."
* "my dreary world is sunshine, suddenly,
and I intend to hold her extra tight."
-Good conclusion with the reference to Guinivere and her knight.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016

Thanks for the generous review.

Steve

reply by Pam (respa) on 01-Feb-2016

You are welcome.

Comment from rspoet

Exceptional

I always save a six for the end of the week
Looks like the end came a little early
Beauty in a poem, only Mr Right
puts stars up in the dark of night
I think she is in very good hands
and God is quite content, even smiling
for once, you got it right
and angels smile too
Six stars

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016

Thanks so much for the great review and the six stars.

Steve

Comment from Javed05

Excellent

Nice poem about the Angel in your life. I like rhyming used . I really liked Some words " silken wings of moonshine" . This piece created good imagery. I like rhyming poemsthanks for sharing with us.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016

Javed, thanks for your kind words.

Steve

Comment from Deborah Marie

Excellent

Very nice contest entry; good luck in the contest. Lovely artwork, color scheme, progression and flow as well as wording. Keep 'em coming and God Bless, Deb

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016

Thanks, Deb.

Steve

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

Tantalizing piece of artwork you have chosen Steve. It pairs well with this wonderfully crafted piece you have delivered for this love poem contest. I am sure this one will be tough to beat.
God bless!
Steve

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016

Thanks, Steve. I always aim to at least give the judges something to chew over.

Steve

reply by Neonewman on 01-Feb-2016

LOL! My pleasure Steve!

reply by Anonymous Member on 05-Feb-2016

LOL! My pleasure Steve!

Comment from trumby

Excellent

Beautiful, well written love poe.. Sweet and so romantic. God sent angels to be with us. Well chosen words perfectly matched with your beautiful image. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016

Thanks for the very kind words.

Steve

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

This is an unique piece of poetry dear Steve! You have made a brave choice to stand out from the rest. The poem itself is delightful and exquisite.
Thank you for sharing!
I hope you win.
Good luck!
Virtual six!
Blessings!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016

Thanks, Rebekka!

Yes, I always aim to at least stand out. I am sure it backfires sometimes...

Thanks for the virtual sixer as well.

Steve

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

Aw! This is simply beautiful, Steve. It's a Rondeau Redouble I believe. Awfully difficult one to write but you pulled it off in great style. Wishing you the best in this contest. Drew

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016

Thanks, Drew - glad you enjoyed.

Yes, I seem a bit fixated on this form at the moment...

Steve

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this poem. It describes a kind of tarnished angel. Your words are well chosen. The rhythm works well. Thanks for sharing. Hope you win!!
Bill

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016

Thanks, Bill.

Not so tarnished in fact...

Steve

Comment from teols2016

Excellent

Very nice. The format seems complicated, but you handled it great. I enjoyed reading this and can't spot any issues. Well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016

Thanks for the kind words.

Steve