Comment from Cheryl9359

Excellent

This is a great poem. I've never heard of a Rispetto Poem before. I would like to try it but seems so hard eh we'll see. You did a wonderful job on yours, good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2016

It's not that hard and you should try one. It was fun.

Comment from flamingstar

Exceptional

Wow, how true! Well written with snappy rhyming and carefully chosen words. The only suggestion I have is to make "break through" two words as you're using it as a verb. I believe "breakthrough" is the noun.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2016

Oh darnit you are right, I did fix that. Thanks so much for the most gracious review. All those shiny stars always make a poets day.

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

I bet you are such a lovely grandma. I bet you are so sweet to those children as it should be. Dragons fascinate adults and children and can be seen in light or dark.

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2016

Yep they are spoiled, they are the sweetest boys. Yeah dragons do tend to fascinate. Thanks so much for your lovely review.

reply by foxangie123 on 20-Jan-2016

Welcome. Kids should be spoiled then their kids would be spoiled..

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

The dragon is always ready to attack us in a weak moment. We have to be on guard all the time to prevent him from winning over our minds. Good luck with the contest

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2016

He is always waiting for that moment. Thanks for the understanding review, much appreciated.