Christine's Poems
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Comment from Bill O'Bier
The language you chose did a very nice job at creating an image for me...I could close my eyes and hear the music. For me, the word keyboard in the last line did not seem to fit right. Thanks for sharing
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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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The language you chose did a very nice job at creating an image for me...I could close my eyes and hear the music. For me, the word keyboard in the last line did not seem to fit right. Thanks for sharing
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Hi Bill Thanks an appreciation for you time to read and review my poem for this challenge and I am glad you could hear the music. I used the word keyboard to finish with as I believe that is what a piano has and It fitted with my word applaud in line 6. But I thank you for letting me know of you concern. I dont play piano myself ( except for chopsticks LOL) Cheers Christine😃