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Sweet Stephanie

A poem I wrote for someone special

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Comment from Reedblitzerman
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Hey Monty thank you for your offering. It was most interesting to read the story below. If only as a young man I had filtered potential matches with my writing - wonderful idea. So your lady friend got to see the real you. Good luck.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2015

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
    Thank yiu my friend it was a beautiful idea that came to me one nite and it is wonderful
Comment from Jacob Collins
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She may have a long wait in searching for her perfect man, but hopefully she will find him. I enjoyed reading this piece, Earthwriter. I thought that you captured her hope and love well and I liked the imagery you used. I couldn't find any faults. Thanks for sharing...Jacob

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2015

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
    Thank you Jacob
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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A moving poem for someone special. I suppose on-line dating can be a bit unpredictable, a bit different from meeting someone in the flesh so to speak. Reading both your well written poem and your author notes I hope it works out for you. All the Best Dorothy

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2015

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
    Thank you Dorothy
Comment from write hand blue
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Finding love through poetry is as good a way as any. And I wish you all the best of luck.

A well written short poem... :) Mel.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2015

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
    T h ank you Mel
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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nothing brings a poet more happiness the touching someones soul with what we write.

How very true, my friend. I rarely read peoples profiles preferring to get to know them through the poems they write. I hope all goes well with your meeting and wish the both of you the best. A delightful poem and story, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2015

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
    Thank you Debbie you are awsome
Comment from LIJ Red
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Three quatrains, abab rhymes and acceptable meter, a salute to a lady viewed through rose colored glasses, I'm afraid...an excellent post.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2015

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
    Fair enough would you rather i view her tgrough a dark crystal i am a poet after all thank you
Comment from Zue65
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So, FanStory played cupid on you, congratulations on finding your lady love. Poems can really be an instrument to meet new people and who knows your partner eventually. Thanks for sharing this emotion filled write. God bless.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2015

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
    thank you so much
Comment from OnyxSapphire78
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Thank you for the author notes. This is really a beautiful idea of finding someone who you share little glimpses of your heart to and find romance. Your poem is really moving and I enjoyed it all the way through.

She dreams of love and moonlit walks
Seeking a man whose heart is true

I love the wording here!

Happy writing!

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2015

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
    thank you su much i appreciate you
Comment from rjuselius
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This is a fine example of a piece of love and romantic poetry dear earthwriter! I do love the imagery but I was left with a sense of slight disappointment for I wished for a more detailed description and perhaps a bit of uniqueness. However all in all a sweet poem with a nice dream.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2015

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
    hanks so much for your review
Comment from Mastery
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Hi, Earthwriter. Long time no see. What a year or so? I always like your writing and this one reminds me of why. It is well writrten , flows well and it sounds like you are bride hunting, Monty.

Very nice romantic stuff from beginning to end:

"Seeking a life of joy and laughter
Filled with love and affection
Dreaming of living happily ever after
Two hearts sharing a love connection."

Happy New Year. Bob

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2015

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
    hanks so much for your review
reply by Mastery on 28-Dec-2015
    Thanks for the lengthy response. Bob