Waiting for you
Searching for my Soulmate56 total reviews
Comment from Oatmeal
EARTHWRITER,
The flow was good. The theme was excellent! Your descriptive words were very good for explaining your ideas and your feelings. They were very understandable and comprehensible.
There are no problems and no SPAG.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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EARTHWRITER,
The flow was good. The theme was excellent! Your descriptive words were very good for explaining your ideas and your feelings. They were very understandable and comprehensible.
There are no problems and no SPAG.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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thank you for nice review
Comment from writeapoem
A nicely written poem of romance and when you find her it will not be by chance. I have adored mine for now going on 45 years. All the best and God Bless
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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A nicely written poem of romance and when you find her it will not be by chance. I have adored mine for now going on 45 years. All the best and God Bless
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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thank you for nice review
Comment from acerisestory
Your poem is a lovely one, Monty, full of hope and longing. Maybe because it came together so easily in the end is a sign that this person will be the one.
Your poem has a beautiful flow, and your abab rhyming is very well done. Your fine use of alliteration and enjambment throughout adds to the flow of your words. You've chosen a lovely picture to complement your poem.
I wish you the very best, my friend. Happy New Year! Alana
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Your poem is a lovely one, Monty, full of hope and longing. Maybe because it came together so easily in the end is a sign that this person will be the one.
Your poem has a beautiful flow, and your abab rhyming is very well done. Your fine use of alliteration and enjambment throughout adds to the flow of your words. You've chosen a lovely picture to complement your poem.
I wish you the very best, my friend. Happy New Year! Alana
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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thank you for nice review
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. We are all looking for love and sometimes it takes years and decades to realise this. Well done and happy new year.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. We are all looking for love and sometimes it takes years and decades to realise this. Well done and happy new year.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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thanks so much for the review
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My pleasure.
Comment from patcelaw
Monty what a wonderfully written romantic poem. I hope you dreams come true and that the lady will be yours one day. Blessings for a Happy New Year. May it be a healthy and Happy one for you. Patricia
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Monty what a wonderfully written romantic poem. I hope you dreams come true and that the lady will be yours one day. Blessings for a Happy New Year. May it be a healthy and Happy one for you. Patricia
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Thank you Patricia
Comment from Ben Colder
The love I feel is of a special kind
You are the one I have been waiting for
A true love is rare so hard to find
Sharing your heart with the one you adore
I have mine for 56 years. We knew each other in school. When you know, you know. This poem is deep with understanding. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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The love I feel is of a special kind
You are the one I have been waiting for
A true love is rare so hard to find
Sharing your heart with the one you adore
I have mine for 56 years. We knew each other in school. When you know, you know. This poem is deep with understanding. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Thank you Ben
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Finding that special love can be a very hard thing to do, as this well written poem depicts.
Uses terms such as "love that is rare," and "sweet angel," to much better illustrate the kind of love desired, and the aligning of the moon and stars when it does.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Finding that special love can be a very hard thing to do, as this well written poem depicts.
Uses terms such as "love that is rare," and "sweet angel," to much better illustrate the kind of love desired, and the aligning of the moon and stars when it does.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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thank you for your review
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork that you choose to go with your poem.
Your words express your deep emotions through those many years.
I could truly feel your loneliness I did all I could to hold back my tears.
Cookie
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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I love the artwork that you choose to go with your poem.
Your words express your deep emotions through those many years.
I could truly feel your loneliness I did all I could to hold back my tears.
Cookie
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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thank you Cookie your review touches my heart
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You're very welcome it's nice to know it moved youi.
Take care.
Cookie
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You''re very welcome, take care.
Cookie
Comment from amahra
It's nice to have someone connected to your writing. I hope your meeting of her goes well. Make sure you write a poem about your meeting so we all can share in it. The poem is beautiful and will crafted.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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It's nice to have someone connected to your writing. I hope your meeting of her goes well. Make sure you write a poem about your meeting so we all can share in it. The poem is beautiful and will crafted.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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thanks so much i will write a poem about our meeting
Comment from William Ross
It is a lovely piece of work, well written and well read, Thanks for sharing this with us all. wishing you a very happy and joyous New Year.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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It is a lovely piece of work, well written and well read, Thanks for sharing this with us all. wishing you a very happy and joyous New Year.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Thanks so much William