Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

I love how you have taken a season and it can be incorporated into a passion of love. It can be made into any kind of ecstasy in fact. With just that it shows what an outstanding and brilliant author you are. Fabulous.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015

Hi foxangie123 I am glad you got the gist of this poem about Wintery passion with a twist I enjoyed writing this and humbly accept you lovely praise. Cheers from me

reply by foxangie123 on 19-Dec-2015

A phenomenal piece.

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015

Thanks so much wow

Comment from Amy Greta

Excellent

I absolutely LOVE your spin tingling, sensual winter love poem! My favorite part was when winter couldn't stand to have her melt under his touch, so he stays cold. Wow! There's the winter season analogy, and then there's the "cold heart" idea where winter doesn't want to get his heart broken (or melted) so he stays cold and distant during the warmer months.
I love it!
Amy

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015

Hi Amy, I am glad you found my poem a sensual love poem, that likens Winter to remains aloof and cold, but with a hint of warmth LOL I really appreciate your time and review for my contest entry Cheers

Comment from cj lutton

Excellent

Beautifully crafted poem that brings a certain quality of eroticism and sensuality.

Somehow making the reader begging that winter's touch linger just a bit longer.

Great job and imagery.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015

Hi cj lutton Yes you have hit the nail on the head, exactly as I had hoped the reader would find this. I am glad that you found it so had fun thinking this one up for the contest with Cheers for you for you great review

reply by cj lutton on 20-Dec-2015

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

I don't think I'd want to date this guy. He can keep his chilly paws off of me. This is a great job of personification, tho. For a moment I thought it was about a person.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015

Hi Cindy, it may well be a Mr Winter ha ha no he would be a bit too cold for me but I had fun thinking about this topic and this is it so appreciate you reading , and giving me a great review Cheers

Comment from Sueswrite

Excellent

I love the creative description of just how this magical season can take control of our surroundings and the power winter has that we have no control over. Among its beauty, the strength of this season shows its strength and also its weakness. I am delighted with your creativity. Best of luck to you!

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015

Thank you Sueswrite for taking the time to read and review my Winter Contest entry and for your lovely warm words for this one A big warm Cheers to you

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

1.) Winter (Ecstasy)

2.) To take the warmth now from you(r) soul

3.) What pleasures now will be (divine.)

4.) I'll strip you bare to (lie) with me

5.) And feel your inner (ecstasy)

This was a very interesting and entertaining look at a completely different side of Winter. Very unique~

Please let me know if you decide to revise. I will happily re-rate!

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015

Hi Robyn Thank God for reviewers like you to help correct the 'spags' I really appreciate you casting your eyes over my poem and have I think now made all the corrections so a big THANKS for that ( I didn't make the changes for you to up my rating but instead so it would read much better ) I really appreciate your time and comments so a big Cheers to you.

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015

Hi Robyn Thank God for reviewers like you to help correct the 'spags' I really appreciate you casting your eyes over my poem and have I think now made all the corrections so a big THANKS for that ( I didn't make the changes for you to up my rating but instead so it would read much better ) I really appreciate your time and comments so a big Cheers to you.

Comment from Sherylsart

Excellent

Not what I expected when I saw 'general poetry'. But it hooked me when I started to read! It has a little bit of a feel.of a vampire poem (I hope you take that as a complement, not an insult.) Nice rhythm, rhyme and wonderful imagery. One small thing- third stanza, 'I'll curl you toes...'? I think you forgot an 'r' .
Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 19-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015

Hi Sherylsart. Thank you so much for your review and helpful hints, I wasn't sure what category to put it into any suggestions and I will fix the r and appreciate you good luck wishes Cheers