Life, Love, and Other Disasters
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Faith is a wraith"A collection of poems on these themes
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Comment from Pyrrho
You achieve a fine flow here with both sequiturs and non sequiturs, and logical comments and nonsense, and legitimate rhymes and forced rhymes and as I write this My mind repeats to me ... duality, duality, duality on and on.
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015
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You achieve a fine flow here with both sequiturs and non sequiturs, and logical comments and nonsense, and legitimate rhymes and forced rhymes and as I write this My mind repeats to me ... duality, duality, duality on and on.
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015
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Thanks for reviewing...
All the nonsense must have struck a chord with the judges...
Steve
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Very, very cleverly done.
Quite a tongue twister in places but enjoyable to read and fun to keep up with.
Had to read it a second time to make it through without a mistake reading on my part.
Ingenious
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015
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Very, very cleverly done.
Quite a tongue twister in places but enjoyable to read and fun to keep up with.
Had to read it a second time to make it through without a mistake reading on my part.
Ingenious
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015
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Thanks, Barb
We have a winner!
Steve