A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "The Pirate's Mistress"Assorted poems of love
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Comment from Jay Squires
Wow! I don't know what else to say, Missy. You nailed it with this one. Being mistress to the pirate whose wife is his ship. So that's how my wife felt about my writing! You brought that into focus with this lovely poem. Your pirate, though, at least turned over the helm. I could only keep writing. Took me into treacherous waters and shipwreck.
What? I'm talking about your poem. You know what I mean though; when a poem causes the reader to examine himself--that's a heckofa poem!
I DO wish I had a six to give for this.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Wow! I don't know what else to say, Missy. You nailed it with this one. Being mistress to the pirate whose wife is his ship. So that's how my wife felt about my writing! You brought that into focus with this lovely poem. Your pirate, though, at least turned over the helm. I could only keep writing. Took me into treacherous waters and shipwreck.
What? I'm talking about your poem. You know what I mean though; when a poem causes the reader to examine himself--that's a heckofa poem!
I DO wish I had a six to give for this.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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I am delighted with your review, Jay. As always you leave me with a smile!
Missy
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Missy
_ This is a cool poem.
_ Love the pirate's mistress aspect.
_ The artwork is awesome as well.
_ Beautifully presented.
_ Are you going to enter your 'Picture This' challenge poem?
_ You can still post after the posting date/time.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Hi, Missy
_ This is a cool poem.
_ Love the pirate's mistress aspect.
_ The artwork is awesome as well.
_ Beautifully presented.
_ Are you going to enter your 'Picture This' challenge poem?
_ You can still post after the posting date/time.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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I had internet connection problems past few days... So not this one hon... Next time!
Missy
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-Pesty internet problems are a pain.
-Catch you on the next one. (*<*)
Comment from TAB_that's me
I think this is very romantic - it is that sort of naughty romantic thing being as the lover is pirate. It has just enough erotica to entice but so much to need sexual warnings.
Awesome piece Missy.
Teresa
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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I think this is very romantic - it is that sort of naughty romantic thing being as the lover is pirate. It has just enough erotica to entice but so much to need sexual warnings.
Awesome piece Missy.
Teresa
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Awe, thank you Teresa. I am delighted that you chose to read and review my work today. I know you are quite busy.
Missy
Comment from Spiritual Echo
I really thought this was very cool.
Who doesn't like a bad boy that is feared by many, but turns into putty in our arms?
Today a pirate would be either called a power broker or entrepreneur. LOL.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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I really thought this was very cool.
Who doesn't like a bad boy that is feared by many, but turns into putty in our arms?
Today a pirate would be either called a power broker or entrepreneur. LOL.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Memememeeeee, I do. I like this particular bad boy!! LOL
Thank you, for this awesome review, SE.
Missy
Comment from rspoet
Your heart is certainly evident in this write
Great to be a pirate in a poem
swashbuckling, sea loving buccaneer
Errol Flynn in movies of old
sailing the seven seas
Excellent imagery of the ship cutting through the waves
then transition to the amorous life of the fantasy pirate
Although, real pirates are not to nice
Great picture to poem match
"For its then" in line 11, [for it's then], use apostrophe when the meaning is "it is"
Great poem
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Your heart is certainly evident in this write
Great to be a pirate in a poem
swashbuckling, sea loving buccaneer
Errol Flynn in movies of old
sailing the seven seas
Excellent imagery of the ship cutting through the waves
then transition to the amorous life of the fantasy pirate
Although, real pirates are not to nice
Great picture to poem match
"For its then" in line 11, [for it's then], use apostrophe when the meaning is "it is"
Great poem
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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I am on that as soon as I thank you, RS for this over the top review, sweetie.
Know that I am smiling at this moment.
Missy
Comment from Neonewman
My goodness! Brilliantly crafted piece you have delivered for us, your fans. What a wonderful perception of a pirates life, one we are not usually offered. I could go on and on with this magnificent journey you took me on, but I will offer up six stars instead.
God bless and thank you for sharing!
Steve
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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My goodness! Brilliantly crafted piece you have delivered for us, your fans. What a wonderful perception of a pirates life, one we are not usually offered. I could go on and on with this magnificent journey you took me on, but I will offer up six stars instead.
God bless and thank you for sharing!
Steve
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Oh now, Steve, I have no words ....
You delight me with this brilliant review, I am fairly blushing here :)
Missy xx
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Awesome! This would make a great romance series or novel. You should not stop with this piece.
God bless!
Steve
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Awesome! This would make a great romance series or novel. You should not stop with this piece.
God bless!
Steve
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:) We shall see!
Comment from N.K. Wagner
You've captured the longing and hint of jealousy a woman feels when she knows she can never come first in her man's life. Two things: you need an apostrophe in your title and I wish you'd used more descriptive words when talking about the sounds made by the rigging. An interesting snatched of a love story. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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You've captured the longing and hint of jealousy a woman feels when she knows she can never come first in her man's life. Two things: you need an apostrophe in your title and I wish you'd used more descriptive words when talking about the sounds made by the rigging. An interesting snatched of a love story. :) Nancy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Nancy, thank you for the heads up. I have corrected the apostrophe.
I want to thank you for the review as well :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from lightink
This is quite an image (or metaphor :). The man in command with a wise but out of control woman watching him and hoping to be loved and cared for again! Jealousy can drive anyone crazy - especially if the other one is denying that it's well founded. Intuition is hard to cheat though! Wonderful writing!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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This is quite an image (or metaphor :). The man in command with a wise but out of control woman watching him and hoping to be loved and cared for again! Jealousy can drive anyone crazy - especially if the other one is denying that it's well founded. Intuition is hard to cheat though! Wonderful writing!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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XX, You are such a doll for this review hon. I thank you so much.
Missy
Comment from JTStone
Oh girl, you got some crazy fantasies...
That was one I'm gonna share with my girl tonight. I see some roll play and it's all your fault.
JT
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Oh girl, you got some crazy fantasies...
That was one I'm gonna share with my girl tonight. I see some roll play and it's all your fault.
JT
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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LOL, JT, Hope your as good as a pirate as you are as an Angel. :) Love your story by the way :)
Thanks for the chuckle here too!!
Missy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
A very sensual poem about love between pirates. The images are strong and the free verse form is well done. I can see the captain pirate steering the ship headed for a new adventure and seeking a treasure. Good job!
gypsy
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Hello :)
A very sensual poem about love between pirates. The images are strong and the free verse form is well done. I can see the captain pirate steering the ship headed for a new adventure and seeking a treasure. Good job!
gypsy
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Gypsy, thanks hon for the read and review :) He is one of a kind, this pirate...lol.
Missy