Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "This Is Where You Walk Away"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from barkingdog
Another plaintive lyric. What country music is noted for. This one has all the fixin's.
A cheating fella caught by his wife. He doesn't know why he did it, says he's sorry and wants his wife to stay.
No way is she gonna stay.
We applaud her and cry for him. Love that range of emotions.
:) e
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2015
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Another plaintive lyric. What country music is noted for. This one has all the fixin's.
A cheating fella caught by his wife. He doesn't know why he did it, says he's sorry and wants his wife to stay.
No way is she gonna stay.
We applaud her and cry for him. Love that range of emotions.
:) e
Comment Written 14-Oct-2015
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Comment from OLA THOMAS
Very well done lyrics. Rich in true life situational details. The narrator agreed he was responsible for the at fault for the dark clouds forming but it was too late to stop the cloud.
"But, it's too late to say I'm sorry
It's too much to ask you to stay
I can see the dark clouds forming
This is where you walk away."
ola thomas
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2015
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Very well done lyrics. Rich in true life situational details. The narrator agreed he was responsible for the at fault for the dark clouds forming but it was too late to stop the cloud.
"But, it's too late to say I'm sorry
It's too much to ask you to stay
I can see the dark clouds forming
This is where you walk away."
ola thomas
Comment Written 14-Oct-2015
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Brett
_ Yep, let it go and walk away--take a hike.
_ Sounds as if this fellas wanted the moon and the stars, but he's gonna get the 'moon boot!'
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*>*)
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Hi, Brett
_ Yep, let it go and walk away--take a hike.
_ Sounds as if this fellas wanted the moon and the stars, but he's gonna get the 'moon boot!'
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*>*)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2015
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Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
These music lyrics are beautiful and sound like a poem with very nice rhyming in it. Can you tell me what free style is? Does that mean you can write it anyway you want? Sorry that I am so ignorant about some things. I may have known before, but I'm getting so forgetful I don't remember.
Kat
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Hi Brett,
These music lyrics are beautiful and sound like a poem with very nice rhyming in it. Can you tell me what free style is? Does that mean you can write it anyway you want? Sorry that I am so ignorant about some things. I may have known before, but I'm getting so forgetful I don't remember.
Kat
Comment Written 14-Oct-2015
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You're very welcome. Kat
Comment from Eric1
Hi Brett, lovely words written in Country and Western style, great rhyming and proximate rhyming, it has a good rhythm and meter leading to a very good flow, I could feel the beat of the first three stanzas as I read them.
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Hi Brett, lovely words written in Country and Western style, great rhyming and proximate rhyming, it has a good rhythm and meter leading to a very good flow, I could feel the beat of the first three stanzas as I read them.
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The last stanza is the refrain. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
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You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I love all your lyrics in all your pieces. They are down to earth and make so much sense. You are not afraid to attack pieces from the other side of safe. like this one.
Nicely done
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2015
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I love all your lyrics in all your pieces. They are down to earth and make so much sense. You are not afraid to attack pieces from the other side of safe. like this one.
Nicely done
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2015
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