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Short poems poking fun at the human condition.
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Comment from
Dean Kuch
Yeah, and so do a lot of deprived men I know, Shari,
heh-heh. Or perhaps "depraved" men would be a more apt description.
This gives a whole new meaning to putting the "Clean" in Kleenex.
Good stuff... :}
~Dean
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
Love the hoot you give me in every review.
reply by Dean Kuch on 17-Sep-2015
I don't do it for everyone's work, Shari, but I do it for yours.
You're very welcome. ;}
~Dean
Comment from
fastdigits
Three lines that brings a smile
to all who pause to read, left
with lascivious double edged
thoughts of visions of the
meaning behind the words.
Well done
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
Thanks, fastdigits. Lascivious? Me? Well, when the mood hits me. LOL
Comment from
barkingdog
Shari! Did you just go X-rated, or is it all in my filthy little mind?
I could kiss you for making me laugh so hard.(Whoops. 'hard' ... now, I'm cracking myself up.)
Enough already. You know I love you.
:) e
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
Sorry to be so late to reply. My next post will explain my time away from FS for awhile. X-rated? You mean "blow job" has another meaning besides sneezing? LOLOL
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