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Viewing comments for Chapter 5 " Oscar Wilde"Words to pass on to my children
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Comment from Jacob Collins
I'm not familiar with much of Oscar Wilde's work, I remember studying him at school for a while so I suppose that it would be worthwhile taking another look. You painting his life picture well in this piece, I thought that the rhyme worked well and I couldn't find any faults. Thanks for sharing...Jaocb
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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I'm not familiar with much of Oscar Wilde's work, I remember studying him at school for a while so I suppose that it would be worthwhile taking another look. You painting his life picture well in this piece, I thought that the rhyme worked well and I couldn't find any faults. Thanks for sharing...Jaocb
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Thanks for the excellent review
Comment from robyn corum
Very good writing, and a very well put together Acrostic! I enjoy Oscar Wilde very much -- for his poetry and his quotes -- I'm glad to say, not those other things.
I only saw one possible nit: Did you mean to repeat yourself in the last line, as shown below:
"Exhibitionist, this poet had much more to give, but died too early he had much more to give" ?
Good luck in the contest -- this IS for the contest, correct?
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Very good writing, and a very well put together Acrostic! I enjoy Oscar Wilde very much -- for his poetry and his quotes -- I'm glad to say, not those other things.
I only saw one possible nit: Did you mean to repeat yourself in the last line, as shown below:
"Exhibitionist, this poet had much more to give, but died too early he had much more to give" ?
Good luck in the contest -- this IS for the contest, correct?
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review and pointing out the repeated work which I will not correct.
You are correct it is for a contest.