Comment from ellie6

Excellent

A poem of hope and encouragement. The last paragraph Create, Create, Create
is particularly powerful. It exhorts us to seize the moment and not get bogged down in regrets and the mundane.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015

THANKS SO MUCH ELLIE6. your comments are much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

Comment from Gert sherwood

Exceptional

Hello Vance

Such a lovely poem about Him and His amazing gifts.
I often wonder if we stop long enough to thank Him for all that He has given us.
You have wonderful word choices, with vivid nature scenes such a pleasure to the eyes. beautifully done.

Gert

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015

Thanks so much Gert! Your words are so encouraging and now it should be so easy to see why I admire you so much!! You really truly ARE gifted and have the heart of a TRUE TEACHER. Love and Hugs, Vance

reply by Gert sherwood on 16-Aug-2015

You are very welcome Vance

Gert

Comment from Jacob Collins

Excellent

I thought that you captured the beauty of creation well in this piece, I often find myself marvelling at the beauty of the world and the universe and thinking how amazing life is. An enjoyable piece of writing, I couldn't find any faults. Thanks for sharing...Jacob

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015

Thanks so much Jacob, I'm delighted that you enjoyed this and hope it will enrich you thoughts and your life! Blessings! Vance

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

This is a profound philosophical sentiment dear friend! It is a real comfort as I am going through a tough time. The words make me feel better.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Virtual six!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015

Thank you so much rebekka...my mission has been achieved with you! Keep smiling and keep THANKING as I'm sure you have much to be thankful for! Blessings and love! Vance...PS: here's some hugs too...for that virtual six!!!

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Well written poem. True peace and happiness can be found in one simple place and that is "Cast your vote for Jesus. Keep your eyes on Calvary". Do that and peace and happiness are yours for the taking.

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 Comment Written 16-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review Brett, it is much appreciated: Vance

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Gratitude is the one ingredient that can bring happiness every day and I'm happy you focused on this component to write about. These are the best lines for me:
"In this majestic garden of consciousness
Listen as it whispers, softly, for your gratitude.
Know now dearest being in this moment of reality
That gratitude is an ever-present mirror which reflects your gifts!"
Marilyn/BeasPeas

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 Comment Written 16-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015

Thank you so much Marilyn:, your comments are always a gift of joy! Vance