Anthony
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Comment from cercie
Alexis another great piece to read. I am once again looking forward to the next chapter. May I ask a question? when you have dialogue you have ' not two " may I ask why or what the difference is.
Anthony sounds like he is going to use his money and handsome looks to stealing someone's wife lol I am available for a ride on the yacht, though. Silly me
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chris
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Alexis another great piece to read. I am once again looking forward to the next chapter. May I ask a question? when you have dialogue you have ' not two " may I ask why or what the difference is.
Anthony sounds like he is going to use his money and handsome looks to stealing someone's wife lol I am available for a ride on the yacht, though. Silly me
hugs
chris
Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Here in the UK we use single quote marks instead of double, which must be confusing for everyone. With regard to Anthony, let's just say things are not as simple as they look!
I'm off to France tomorrow for a couple of weeks, so my internet connection might be spasmodic. See you when I get back, if not before!
Alexis xxx
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Have a safe trip my friend
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Oh, Oh, A married woman? That spells trouble. Geee it must be awful to be filthy rich. You'd never know if you were loved for yourself or your money. What happened to the other book? Did I miss the end? Hugs Nancy
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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Oh, Oh, A married woman? That spells trouble. Geee it must be awful to be filthy rich. You'd never know if you were loved for yourself or your money. What happened to the other book? Did I miss the end? Hugs Nancy
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Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Lol, no you didn't miss the end but I'm working flat out converting Let's Talk Dirty!' for a presentation in September, so I thought I would start posting this one I started a while back in the meantime. The girls will be back soon! Alexis xxx
Comment from barkingdog
And wouldn't it be just his luck that Lisa is married.
But I have a feeling that that has never stopped him before from getting what he wants.
-it was a mugs(mug's ?) game.
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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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And wouldn't it be just his luck that Lisa is married.
But I have a feeling that that has never stopped him before from getting what he wants.
-it was a mugs(mug's ?) game.
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Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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I think you might be surprised! As I'm sure you know, sometimes money can't buy what you want. Thank you so much for your review and eagle eye. Alexis xxx
