Shepherd
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "For His Name's Sake"poems inspired by Psalm 23
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Comment from mfowler
It's kind of appropriate that I open your rondelet as the poem connected with my thinking over the last twenty four hours. Yesterday I took a dying gentleman on an outing, followed up on funeral arrangements for a friend who we've been helping through dark times, and visited a sick colleague who poured her heart out to me for three hours. I am feeling emotionally and spiritually drained. But, then your message comes in probing questions:
will you reach out to dry a tear?
is there a difference you can make
to soothe a grief, or calm a fear,
to lend a hand, or just be near? They remind me why I do it.
For his name's sake.
Thank you for being the one who reminds me. Loved it.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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It's kind of appropriate that I open your rondelet as the poem connected with my thinking over the last twenty four hours. Yesterday I took a dying gentleman on an outing, followed up on funeral arrangements for a friend who we've been helping through dark times, and visited a sick colleague who poured her heart out to me for three hours. I am feeling emotionally and spiritually drained. But, then your message comes in probing questions:
will you reach out to dry a tear?
is there a difference you can make
to soothe a grief, or calm a fear,
to lend a hand, or just be near? They remind me why I do it.
For his name's sake.
Thank you for being the one who reminds me. Loved it.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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My goodness you brought a tear to my eye. What wonderful things to do. You truly practice what you believe and, no doubt, bring a lot of joy to those who need it. I am sure the people you mention were grateful for the time and consideration you gave to them. Bless you for your efforts and for caring.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi my friend
I believe that those who belive are always prepared and ready to stretch a hand to help. This is so because they are spiritually committed inside.
There is so much love in this world. I think many are ready.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Hi my friend
I believe that those who belive are always prepared and ready to stretch a hand to help. This is so because they are spiritually committed inside.
There is so much love in this world. I think many are ready.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Thank you for the gracious comments and your insights on the message. May many good things come your way. Debi
Comment from c_lucas
You poetry clearly marks you talent as a talented wordsmith. You have did a very good job with this style and I am impressed. There is very good imagery. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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You poetry clearly marks you talent as a talented wordsmith. You have did a very good job with this style and I am impressed. There is very good imagery. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Charlie! This review means a lot to me since I consider you the master of concise. I appreciate the six stars, and even more the comments! Thank you! Debi
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You're welcome, Debi. Charlie
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I am glad you including the guide, as I get very confused by all these forms. I am primarily a prose writer.
I thought this worked very well. The questions posed are not huge big questions, but soft almost pleading. Very nicely penned.
GMG
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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Hi there,
I am glad you including the guide, as I get very confused by all these forms. I am primarily a prose writer.
I thought this worked very well. The questions posed are not huge big questions, but soft almost pleading. Very nicely penned.
GMG
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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Thank you for the great review, GMG. I like that you found the questions soft and almost pleading. Thank you for the kind comments about the writing. Debi
Comment from Eigle Rull
This was a very nicely written poem. It comes through clear as a bell. The meaning is precious and good. It was excellent, my friend.
Always with respect,
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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This was a very nicely written poem. It comes through clear as a bell. The meaning is precious and good. It was excellent, my friend.
Always with respect,
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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Thank you for the kind comments and excellent review. I appreciate it. Debi
Comment from hannahorion
This poem conforms to the Rondelet Format; Title: For His Name's Sake. Comment: The message is clear the format is correct. The poem succinct and concise. It was a pleasure to read and to think about. Good Luck. I gave it five stars.
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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This poem conforms to the Rondelet Format; Title: For His Name's Sake. Comment: The message is clear the format is correct. The poem succinct and concise. It was a pleasure to read and to think about. Good Luck. I gave it five stars.
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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Thank you for your analysis and for letting me know you enjoyed reading this poem. I appreciate the encouragement.
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My pleasure
