Comment from ellie6

Excellent

What a romantic and uplifting story. Very well written, I could picture the scene. The illustration of the dog fits in perfectly. A really good read.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2015

Thanks so much for you kind review Ellie6. I am glad you could see with your mind what you were reading, that makes me smile.

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Comment from Mary H-W

Excellent

This is a nice, albeit short, romantic tale. I found it to be compelling. You fooled me, as I assumed Charlie would be the name of the dog.

This is well written, but I have a couple of typos to point out:

wasn't on a lease and was at the ('lease' should say leash)
give or take and inch... ('and' should say an)

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015

Thank you Mary for the well received review...rest assured I am off to fix my boo boo's :)

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Comment from 4hisglory

Excellent

Very well written story. I could see, hear, and feel with the MC. The story flowed very smothly and time pasted at just the right pace.

Only suggestion I have is a period after "seafood" and begin a new sentence with "You can give me the lowdown...

Looking forward to the rest of the story. Blessin,LaVonne

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015

Thanks 4HG, for the great review and i will go back and take a look :)

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