Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem. It put a smile on my face.
You have a way with words. You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015

Thank you cookie:)

reply by misscookie on 10-Jul-2015

You're very welcome, have a blessed week end.
Cookie

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

As annoying as I am sure it was. . .I could not help but laugh at the image you painted ;-) (though I'm sure had I had to endure it - it would be a grimace, not a smirk I would be wearing!)

Wonderfully painted :-)

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015

lol, thanks so much for the wonderful review:)

Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr

Excellent

Hello poet friend
I must admit that was a very entertaining story. Thanks for sharing and I wish you the very best in your work. Loyd

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015

Thank you Loyd:)

reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 10-Jul-2015

It was my pleasure and you are welcome.
May I invite you to check out my work when you have some extra time?
Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

I take it, this guy you describe did not go down too well with you. Perhaps, as we say in England, he fancied his chances! Good descriptions and well chosen words to convey your message. Faye

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015

thank you for the great review Faye:)

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

Your poem paints an excellent picture of the cacophany of the dance club (can't stand the things myself) and ther's always one, louder and more showy than the rest. Got to be the king of the castle. I don't know do they more of what they're after? I doubt it, he was still trying after three hours!

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015

Thank you for the great review:)

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

Great descriptions of this annoying guy both physically and his attitude that allowed me to imagine his strutting and whooping, Teresa. Great play on words and thanks for sharing your night.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015

Thanks Karyn:)

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Oh my God! With a look and an attitude like that, I think the dude is going to be single for a long time. You don't need an image, Teresa, your words always paint the scene. I like how you're playing with the words seen/scene. Yup, he surely was seen making a scene, LOL. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015

Thanks Lou for the fun review - made me laugh:)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your poem paints a good picture of an annoying person for sure. I am all for having a good time, but this sounds like overkill.

Good job with the description you gave the reader. I see no changes. Your great word choice describe this person well.

Good job and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015

Thank you Jan:)

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

You did just create a picture in this poem. The title is already lovely. Lots of alliteration, original simile. You two went out, and a guy was really annoying you in every way possible.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015

Thank you Ine:)

Comment from thee-name

Excellent

Good poem. I enjoyed reading your free verse writing.

Looking for a rooster
or a hen? Three hours later,
still alone,
strut, strut, strutting.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015

Thanks:)

reply by thee-name on 10-Jul-2015

thank you!:>)