Homemade Rolls
Palindrome Poem31 total reviews
Comment from Emily George
Good palindrome, the layout suited the reverse of verse. Those mouth watering descriptive words taking the reader on a sensory trip, just one bite is all I wanted. Great picture to compliment your work.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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Good palindrome, the layout suited the reverse of verse. Those mouth watering descriptive words taking the reader on a sensory trip, just one bite is all I wanted. Great picture to compliment your work.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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Thank you for the encouraging review, Emily. I appreciate you stating that poem takes the reader on a sensory trip that makes their mouth water. Thank you. Debi
Comment from krys123
Debi;
-This is so much fun exponentially excellent and plus it as a dietary need to my weight gain. You create an appetite in me, for the love of hot bread being buttered.
Your palindrome Is precise and actually perfectly written according to the requirements. Very clever and witty year imagination is truly inventive and ingeniously creative.
- Good luck in the contest and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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Debi;
-This is so much fun exponentially excellent and plus it as a dietary need to my weight gain. You create an appetite in me, for the love of hot bread being buttered.
Your palindrome Is precise and actually perfectly written according to the requirements. Very clever and witty year imagination is truly inventive and ingeniously creative.
- Good luck in the contest and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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LOL, Alex. Bread is irresistible when it is fresh and hot, isn't it? It doesn't do much for my waistline either. Thank you for the encouraging comments about the writing and well wishes for the contest. Debi
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You are sincerely welcome my dear friend
Comment from Ginnygray
w.j. Debi, I am impressed with this poem! You have taught me a new form, the palindrome! You have done such a remarkable job on this and about one of my favorite foods, rolls! :). I really enjoyed the personification of the knife anticipating the inside of the roll! The best smelling kitchen is the aroma of bread cooking! The reader should definitely salivate with this one! Nicely written. The picture makes the poem as well! Now, I think I would like to have one for real!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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w.j. Debi, I am impressed with this poem! You have taught me a new form, the palindrome! You have done such a remarkable job on this and about one of my favorite foods, rolls! :). I really enjoyed the personification of the knife anticipating the inside of the roll! The best smelling kitchen is the aroma of bread cooking! The reader should definitely salivate with this one! Nicely written. The picture makes the poem as well! Now, I think I would like to have one for real!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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I hadn't heard of a palindrome poem until I saw a contest for them last year on FS. It isn't a type you see often.
I agree, a kitchen smells its best when there is bread of some sort in the oven. I have such a weakness for bread. I am happy you enjoyed the poem and I appreciate the encouraging comments about the writing. I hope you get a nice tasty roll for real!
Comment from tfawcus
Quite a conundrum to create lines that can be reversed like this whilst also maintaining a flow of sense in the mirror image. It must have taken a while to achieve! A rather excellent poem to wake up to on a Sunday morning! I feel breakfast coming on. Off to the bread oven!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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Quite a conundrum to create lines that can be reversed like this whilst also maintaining a flow of sense in the mirror image. It must have taken a while to achieve! A rather excellent poem to wake up to on a Sunday morning! I feel breakfast coming on. Off to the bread oven!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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Thank you for a most encouraging review. I am happy enjoyed reading it and I hope you had a wonderful breakfast and a fabulous Sunday. Debi
Comment from Sam Bates
You nailed it! Great palindrome poem!....It is such a difficult structure ...I know that because I tried to write one...three words later I gave it up. :) Flowed nicely, wouldn't change a thing....and... it made me hungry! Enjoy your day! Sam
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You nailed it! Great palindrome poem!....It is such a difficult structure ...I know that because I tried to write one...three words later I gave it up. :) Flowed nicely, wouldn't change a thing....and... it made me hungry! Enjoy your day! Sam
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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Thank you for the exceptional review, Sam! I appreciate the shiny six stars. Even more I appreciate that you have tried one of these so you can relate. I've attempted a palindrome a few times before and given up part way though. Last week someone brought me some fresh baked rolls and they were so yummy it brought a few phrases to mind, and one thing led to another. Anyway, thank you again and I hope some fresh baked rolls are in your future.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good job! I like your poem. It has good rhythm and a nice flow. The format is attractive and easy to read. I don't see anything to change is perfect the way it is.
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Good job! I like your poem. It has good rhythm and a nice flow. The format is attractive and easy to read. I don't see anything to change is perfect the way it is.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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Thank you for the encouraging review. I appreciate you mentioning the rhythm and the formatting. Thank you for stopping by.
Comment from rspoet
You've written a very fine palindrome poem
Most of these seem forced when read backwards, but yours reads very well in both directions
The sensory imagery is excellent: the smell, taste, and texture make the reader want to taste one of those home baked rolls
Very good picture to compliment the poem
Well done, please pass the rolls.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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You've written a very fine palindrome poem
Most of these seem forced when read backwards, but yours reads very well in both directions
The sensory imagery is excellent: the smell, taste, and texture make the reader want to taste one of those home baked rolls
Very good picture to compliment the poem
Well done, please pass the rolls.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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Thank you for the encouraging review and for mentioning the sensory imagery. If it weren't so hot I might bake some rolls and send you one. Thank you!
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You are most welcome. Stay clear of the hot oven. I'll enjoy a virtual roll, instead.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a strong poem. It easily grabbed my interest - food will do that! I love the word choices - including the repetition of "yummy!" And it flowed beautifully. Well done!
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I thought this was a strong poem. It easily grabbed my interest - food will do that! I love the word choices - including the repetition of "yummy!" And it flowed beautifully. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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Thank you for the lovely review. I am happy you liked he topic. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi
Comment from royowen
I'll have to try one of these, they look reasonably attemptable, there are so many different forms, wired and wonderful, so I find this one a good one to copy, well done, delicious subject, hot rolls with butter, Melty and runny, nicely worded, a lighthearted entry in this contest, and a worthy one. Well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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I'll have to try one of these, they look reasonably attemptable, there are so many different forms, wired and wonderful, so I find this one a good one to copy, well done, delicious subject, hot rolls with butter, Melty and runny, nicely worded, a lighthearted entry in this contest, and a worthy one. Well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Roy. I appreciate the encouraging comments. I am pleased you enjoyed the topic. Thank you for nice compliment that you would use this as a model for your own palindrome. Good luck with yours. Debi
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Most welcome
Comment from BeasPeas
Very nicely done and it makes sense. Creative and accompanied by a tempting image. I think the palindrome poem is a difficult form, but you did it well. Marilyn
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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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Very nicely done and it makes sense. Creative and accompanied by a tempting image. I think the palindrome poem is a difficult form, but you did it well. Marilyn
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Marilyn. I've never tried a palindrome before and it takes some thinking to get a line to make sense forwards and backwards. I appreciate you stating it makes sense. That was my biggest worry.
Debi