Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

A tiny tale of terror, indeed! I'm still shaking. The artist is evidently a victim of his own creation. How symbolic! Perhaps we should be more careful what we create? Thank you for this tiny tale, and for terrifying me to pieces. :p I thoroughly enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015

Indeed, sometimes the things we create can be VERY frightening - but it's possible that they get better as they grow up :) Thanks for the great review, MissMerri.

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

Scary stuff, mystery writer. You managed to describe the scene and your primary character, the artist. Then you added the storm for auditory drama. Excellent use of the senses to involve the reader.
Good luck in the contest.

:) e

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Thank you, barkingdog, for your very kind review -- it's much appreciated!

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi...

_ This really is good.
_ You packed a wallop in so few words.
_ Don't think I'll take up paining anytime soon! (*>*)
_ Excellent writing and great entry.
_ Good luck.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)


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 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Thanks so much for the kind words, Jax, they are much appreciated!

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I really liked how you used the content of the painting to set the stage for the climax. Good strong imagery. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Thank you for reviewing my story, and for your kind words and good wishes. Much appreciated!