Tiny Tales of Terror
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Popcorn Horror"Multi-authored book of flash/micro horror fiction
52 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
Felt like I was there. Good build up. Loved being inside this little pervert's mind. It had a great "Creep Show", flavor. Good steady build up.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Felt like I was there. Good build up. Loved being inside this little pervert's mind. It had a great "Creep Show", flavor. Good steady build up.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Thank you, Gretchen. I'm very pleased to know that you enjoyed the story and the way in which it was written most of all. However, those six stars are very nice too!
Much obliged, my friend.
~Dean :}
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh nicely played again.
I did not see this one coming and you just threw it on me without warning.
Very nice addition to the pieces.
Laughed when I read the last part of his not even realizing he was next.
Great piece
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Oh nicely played again.
I did not see this one coming and you just threw it on me without warning.
Very nice addition to the pieces.
Laughed when I read the last part of his not even realizing he was next.
Great piece
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Dean: she knows that he knows and maybe, a close encounter of...popcorn and a movie? This is like people liking the tales of gossip, gets deeper and deeper. Poor guy, didn't even have a German shephbard to protect him. Where were the million dollar a day police department searching for this preditor, escaped from the jail for murder in the x degree? Great stories and kept me reading. I'm not opening the door.
Got to pack, stopped in to say HI, Dean! I'll throw some snow in the Denver mountains for you. Maybe, I'll be inspired to write a story or poem or two. See you or chat later! Get yourself a life alert. Remember, Great is Thy Faithfulness and Amazing Grace will guard your heart and protect you! Listen to some praise songs of Michael Smith, too. People like to sing to church music for the dead in Christ, now transformed to children of the light! God bless! flylikeaneagle
I'm sure you have a lot of fans to write notes to, we missed you. God has plans and purpose of joy for you Dean! Enjoy your life, second by second, day by day!
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Dean: she knows that he knows and maybe, a close encounter of...popcorn and a movie? This is like people liking the tales of gossip, gets deeper and deeper. Poor guy, didn't even have a German shephbard to protect him. Where were the million dollar a day police department searching for this preditor, escaped from the jail for murder in the x degree? Great stories and kept me reading. I'm not opening the door.
Got to pack, stopped in to say HI, Dean! I'll throw some snow in the Denver mountains for you. Maybe, I'll be inspired to write a story or poem or two. See you or chat later! Get yourself a life alert. Remember, Great is Thy Faithfulness and Amazing Grace will guard your heart and protect you! Listen to some praise songs of Michael Smith, too. People like to sing to church music for the dead in Christ, now transformed to children of the light! God bless! flylikeaneagle
I'm sure you have a lot of fans to write notes to, we missed you. God has plans and purpose of joy for you Dean! Enjoy your life, second by second, day by day!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
Comment from ravenblack
This is like a movie come to life, the passive voyeurism of watching a slasher flick brought to a whole new level. In this case, what you watch can kill you. Excellent horror tinged with a bit of social commentary.
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This is like a movie come to life, the passive voyeurism of watching a slasher flick brought to a whole new level. In this case, what you watch can kill you. Excellent horror tinged with a bit of social commentary.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
He he - didn't scare me, as most people
around our property seem to be O.A.P's -
but I'll never eat popcorn again without
thinking of this gal. Yikes!!
grabbin' her coat and leavin(')!
Margaret
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He he - didn't scare me, as most people
around our property seem to be O.A.P's -
but I'll never eat popcorn again without
thinking of this gal. Yikes!!
grabbin' her coat and leavin(')!
Margaret
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Dean
Yes our horror writer another unexpected ending a knock at the door sure sounds like the toothy smiling gal doesnt' plan on sharing popcorn
Time to do human shredding
Gert
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Hi Dean
Yes our horror writer another unexpected ending a knock at the door sure sounds like the toothy smiling gal doesnt' plan on sharing popcorn
Time to do human shredding
Gert
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
Comment from BeasPeas
Ha! He has a front row (window) seat. Clear and consistent subjective dialogue. Reader is right there with him as he describes the situation. Now she's on her way to see him. Oh-oh! But--maybe he'll like it.
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Ha! He has a front row (window) seat. Clear and consistent subjective dialogue. Reader is right there with him as he describes the situation. Now she's on her way to see him. Oh-oh! But--maybe he'll like it.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
Comment from Megalips
You would know that I would really like this one, Dean! "A Room with a View" gone horror. I actually like some of those old Hitchcock flicks...love the way he puts himself in the movie, just like Steven King does. I saw a new book by Steven, "Finders Keepers" on Amazon...you read that yet?
This is just another awesome story and I'm really gonna start to try and rack my brain to find something to put in your little book!
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You would know that I would really like this one, Dean! "A Room with a View" gone horror. I actually like some of those old Hitchcock flicks...love the way he puts himself in the movie, just like Steven King does. I saw a new book by Steven, "Finders Keepers" on Amazon...you read that yet?
This is just another awesome story and I'm really gonna start to try and rack my brain to find something to put in your little book!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Oh Dean - how do you keep thinking of them? This one is very good. Every time I read one of these I feel I want to take part - Oh I mean in the writing (I don't want anybody knocking on my door LOL) - maybe I'll get round to it. Keep the book going - it's such a good idea. I'm sure you'll have no difficulty doing that. Warm regards Dorothy x -- Loved the author notes - you have a weird sense of humour LOL
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Oh Dean - how do you keep thinking of them? This one is very good. Every time I read one of these I feel I want to take part - Oh I mean in the writing (I don't want anybody knocking on my door LOL) - maybe I'll get round to it. Keep the book going - it's such a good idea. I'm sure you'll have no difficulty doing that. Warm regards Dorothy x -- Loved the author notes - you have a weird sense of humour LOL
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
Comment from Ulla
Lovely. I liked this a lot and the guy must actually have known what was coming. In a wicked way he deserved it, peeking as he did. As usual it made me smile. Haven't seen your writing for a while and am glad it's here again. Well written. Ulla
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Lovely. I liked this a lot and the guy must actually have known what was coming. In a wicked way he deserved it, peeking as he did. As usual it made me smile. Haven't seen your writing for a while and am glad it's here again. Well written. Ulla
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
