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Poems about the coastline

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Comment from rspoet
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A multilevel lighthouse poem that shines
Whether an actual lighthouse, a physical person or spiritual, it guides and warns so that the journey is completed safely.
Written in sonnet form with very good exact and near rhyme and good meter.
Excellent picture to poem match, framed in the blue of the sea, with a lighthouse beaming font
Excellent

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 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem.
Comment from TAB_that's me
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Lighthouse being either a person or a spiritual being (God?). Either way this is a great metaphorical lighthouse poem.

Teresa

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 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
    Ah someone I feel I know at last. This poem seems to have attracted a lot of reviewers new to me. You seem to have picked up on all the personifications possible here. Thanks Teresa for the review and grade.