Stealing Kisses
being naughty21 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Poem flows well with consistent abab rhyme throughout and good enjambment. Stanza 3, line 2 - 'This I can Knot deny' - using a capital for Knot sounds as if this word is intentional - or did you mean 'not' as in ' not intentional'? Last stanza 'off to steel' should be 'steal'. Well written poem about a risky venture LOL. Warm regards Dorothy x
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reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Poem flows well with consistent abab rhyme throughout and good enjambment. Stanza 3, line 2 - 'This I can Knot deny' - using a capital for Knot sounds as if this word is intentional - or did you mean 'not' as in ' not intentional'? Last stanza 'off to steel' should be 'steal'. Well written poem about a risky venture LOL. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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I meant knot thank you and I will fix the steal. thank you again.
