Get Well, Brooke!
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "My Heart is Broken"Writing for Brooke
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is great. Not only have you included the general feelings all of us have about Brooke, but you added your personal stories. I enjoyed reading and remembering. I cannot say anything more except "Thank you."
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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This is great. Not only have you included the general feelings all of us have about Brooke, but you added your personal stories. I enjoyed reading and remembering. I cannot say anything more except "Thank you."
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thank you. Brooke has become a part of my daily life. Not being able to read her daily posts has been difficult. I pray she comes back to all of us soon.
Comment from bookishfabler
Is this Spanish?(humoros) (humorous)
with that said, this is beautiful. It may not be a poem, but we writers do not need to be able to write poetry. I'm not big on it either. It's great for some people's expression, just not mine. It is amazing what friends we meet here on S. One reason I never left. I go on hiatus but always sign back up. I don't know what happened to your friend, but you are so sweet and I'm sure will love your version of a poem to her.
Hugs HEidi
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Is this Spanish?(humoros) (humorous)
with that said, this is beautiful. It may not be a poem, but we writers do not need to be able to write poetry. I'm not big on it either. It's great for some people's expression, just not mine. It is amazing what friends we meet here on S. One reason I never left. I go on hiatus but always sign back up. I don't know what happened to your friend, but you are so sweet and I'm sure will love your version of a poem to her.
Hugs HEidi
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks for catching that...it should have been humorous. Yes, I am sure Brooke won't mind this not being a poem.
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This is the first time I caught a spag with you. Good grammar and spelling girlfriend.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a beautiful letter to brooke, sasha, and I know she will appreciate your love that has been poured into it. I spotted one error and that is humorous comments instead of humoros comments
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this is a beautiful letter to brooke, sasha, and I know she will appreciate your love that has been poured into it. I spotted one error and that is humorous comments instead of humoros comments
Comment Written 29-May-2015
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Thanks for catching the spag, I just fixed it.
Comment from Nosha17
Your letter to Brooke is written with much sincerity and love and am sure she will love it. I heard how ill she is and also said a prayer for her, so many on this site know and love her. Lovely tribute. Faye
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Your letter to Brooke is written with much sincerity and love and am sure she will love it. I heard how ill she is and also said a prayer for her, so many on this site know and love her. Lovely tribute. Faye
Comment Written 29-May-2015
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Yes, she is love and admired by so many here on FS.
Comment from petalangela
What a heart rending letter showing such a sense of loss and impending confusion . I hope that Brooke gets to read or to have this read to her. I have not had the honour to have been reviewed by what sounds like a remarkable woman
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What a heart rending letter showing such a sense of loss and impending confusion . I hope that Brooke gets to read or to have this read to her. I have not had the honour to have been reviewed by what sounds like a remarkable woman
Comment Written 29-May-2015
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She is definitely a talented, remarkable, and beautiful woman that I feel blessed to have gotten to know.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Congratulations, Sasha, on this beautiful tribute letter to Brooke. You have managed to include the important things within your FanStory relationship, and most of all your love. This will always be a treasure, Giddy
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Congratulations, Sasha, on this beautiful tribute letter to Brooke. You have managed to include the important things within your FanStory relationship, and most of all your love. This will always be a treasure, Giddy
Comment Written 29-May-2015
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Thank you so very much.
Comment from c_lucas
There comes a time in one's life when we have to say good bye to a very dear and close friend. Happily, this is not one of them. Brooke will be with use for many more years to come.
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There comes a time in one's life when we have to say good bye to a very dear and close friend. Happily, this is not one of them. Brooke will be with use for many more years to come.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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I pray you are right. Aggressive MS is quite serious and most do not survive it. It is the worst type of MS you can have.
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I look for Brooke to return.
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I do too.
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You're welcome, Sasha. Charlie
Comment from Antoine Charlemaine
Good for you, Sasha. Brooke will be delighted with your words of love and encouragement. You may not be a poet, but you know how to express sentiments of the inmost being in a way that many cannot. Well done. Really beautiful.
Anthony
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Good for you, Sasha. Brooke will be delighted with your words of love and encouragement. You may not be a poet, but you know how to express sentiments of the inmost being in a way that many cannot. Well done. Really beautiful.
Anthony
Comment Written 29-May-2015
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Thank you. I feel blessed to be able to call her a friend.
Comment from judester
A heartfelt message to a special woman who has shared her life and joys with you. This is genuine and honest, your compassionate love shines through each sentiment expressed. We are all wishing her well and I love this tribute to her. Each writer bringing their unique style and personal stories of how Brooke touched their lives, cheers judester
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A heartfelt message to a special woman who has shared her life and joys with you. This is genuine and honest, your compassionate love shines through each sentiment expressed. We are all wishing her well and I love this tribute to her. Each writer bringing their unique style and personal stories of how Brooke touched their lives, cheers judester
Comment Written 29-May-2015
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Thank you so very much. I feel blessed to be able to call her a friend.
Comment from visionary1234
I cried as I read this Sasha - you're writing so much that's in all our hearts at the moment. I just finished a sonnet for Brooke today. I hope she feels the outpouring of love and I hope it helps her, in any way that's humanly possible. Beautiful writing from your heart here. Thank you.
:)Sharyn
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I cried as I read this Sasha - you're writing so much that's in all our hearts at the moment. I just finished a sonnet for Brooke today. I hope she feels the outpouring of love and I hope it helps her, in any way that's humanly possible. Beautiful writing from your heart here. Thank you.
:)Sharyn
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thank you so very much. I have been crying all week. Brooke has always been a dear friend and I feel so helpless. Fortunately, I live near the market where I can get 7 day candles for a few pesos and have several lit for her on my little table by my computer. Three are yellow, just like the Dandelions. Thank you so much for the lovely 6 stars, they mean a lot to me.